1. Posted: March 5, 2017In:

    Retreating from life after a tragedy, a detective on temporary leave finds out that recent murders are linked to his estranged wife and must help bring her to justice.

    Jordan Pitt Penpusher

    Just to add to the first comment, I think a description of what type of person the detective is would be useful, to help us connect with him straight away. ?Use any adjective you feel best describes him.

    Just to add to the first comment, I think a description of what type of person the detective is would be useful, to help us connect with him straight away. ?Use any adjective you feel best describes him.

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  2. Posted: November 21, 2016In:

    After her first love dies, a taxi driver on her way to sign divorce papers is showed what might have been when different versions of her younger self appear as subsequent passengers in her cab.

    pdlz78 Logliner

    After her son's marriage separation, a divorced taxi driver who is full of regret, sees what might have been from past failed relationships, and uses these visions to help repair her son's marriage before it's too late.

    After her son’s marriage separation, a divorced taxi driver who is full of regret, sees what might have been from past failed relationships, and uses these visions to help repair her son’s marriage before it’s too late.

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  3. Posted: September 24, 2016In:

    When she arrives at a trading post, her missing husband makes her very popular with the local marshalls

    JoshyPato Penpusher

    The character, event and action are all very unclear in this logline. Referring to the character ?is vague, a clearer definition of the character is needed. ?Arriving at a trading post? is a weak event and not enough to carry the action of the film. Also, there is no action at all. More specifics neRead more

    The character, event and action are all very unclear in this logline. Referring to the character ?is vague, a clearer definition of the character is needed. ?Arriving at a trading post? is a weak event and not enough to carry the action of the film. Also, there is no action at all. More specifics needed.

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