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  1. Posted: May 12, 2019In: Noir

    After discovering his travelling companion has a bag of cash a man starts a conversation hoping to blackmail him. When that fails he threatens violence that escalates into murder.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 17, 2019 at 2:18 pm

    Believing a past unfair prison conviction ruined his life, a man blackmails his travelling companion that got away with murder as a youth. As their battle of wits unfold, his resolve is challenged and his violent nature is uncovered.

    Believing a past unfair prison conviction ruined his life, a man blackmails his travelling companion that got away with murder as a youth. As their battle of wits unfold, his resolve is challenged and his violent nature is uncovered.

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  2. Posted: April 30, 2019In: Noir

    Trapped in an abandon house by a storm two gangsters engage in a battle of wits and violence try to ensure their own safety regardless of whose side arrives first.

    AlexJenkins Penpusher
    Added an answer on May 11, 2019 at 1:49 pm

    I think it's a solid idea, but would really require strong writing to pull it off. I would say a script like Reservoir Dogs would be a good script to reference for your writing.? The whole movie, for the most part, takes places in a warehouse and involves a similar battle of wits, however with moreRead more

    I think it’s a solid idea, but would really require strong writing to pull it off. I would say a script like Reservoir Dogs would be a good script to reference for your writing.? The whole movie, for the most part, takes places in a warehouse and involves a similar battle of wits, however with more characters involved.

     

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  3. Posted: May 2, 2019In: Noir

    When a Texas cotton farmer’s land stops yielding crops, he teams up with an old friend to distribute VHS pornography tapes; leaving his family and slipping into a world of depravity and greed to become the undisputed King of Pornography in Texas. (1980)

    Robb Ross Samurai
    Added an answer on May 4, 2019 at 12:17 am

    Agree with the others. As well, clarify if it's production and not just distribution because it's hard to see depravity with the latter. With depravity, greed becomes secondary or an assumed part of it.Even if this is based on someone real, try to strengthen the hook and family part so that this canRead more

    Agree with the others. As well, clarify if it’s production and not just distribution because it’s hard to see depravity with the latter. With depravity, greed becomes secondary or an assumed part of it.

    Even if this is based on someone real, try to strengthen the hook and family part so that this can be more than ‘Boogie Nights in Texas’.

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