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  1. Posted: April 8, 2019In: Noir

    Gruesome copycat murders hit a sleepy-coastal town, forcing an excited rookie to seek the help of a miserable retired detective, only to stumble upon information that endangers both their lives.

    Ckharper Samurai
    Added an answer on April 24, 2019 at 5:48 pm

    ?When gruesome copycat murders hit a sleepy coastal-town, a rookie cop enlists the help of a retired detective to hunt the killer.? Agree with other comment that discovery of info probably doesn?t need to be here. Their lives are going to be in danger bc they are hunting a killer after all. I?m guesRead more

    ?When gruesome copycat murders hit a sleepy coastal-town, a rookie cop enlists the help of a retired detective to hunt the killer.?

    Agree with other comment that discovery of info probably doesn?t need to be here. Their lives are going to be in danger bc they are hunting a killer after all. I?m guessing that since you put ?copycat? in there and this vague ?information?, they are going to find out that somehow another cop was involved in original murders and maybe current ones. Which has been done many times before. But I could be wrong! And even if I?m right, a brilliant script is a brilliant script even if has similar plot to others.

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  2. Posted: April 3, 2019In: Noir

    Bound by an inescapable sense to carry out his late master’s legacy, a masked hitman becomes a rising gangland player with the sole purpose of taking down the very criminal organization who employ him.

    Robb Ross Samurai
    Added an answer on April 10, 2019 at 12:57 am

    Somehow missed this. Agree with Richiev. However, add details to make this stand out since the general story has been done many times before. That might be more about the protag, when this is, where, etc. "Masked" gives this a superhero feel, but nothing makes that seem necessary or at least worthyRead more

    Somehow missed this. Agree with Richiev. However, add details to make this stand out since the general story has been done many times before. That might be more about the protag, when this is, where, etc.

    “Masked” gives this a superhero feel, but nothing makes that seem necessary or at least worthy enough for the logline. Clarify if the mask is important; otherwise, cut it.

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  3. Posted: March 7, 2019In: Noir

    What is the most important for you; to be free despite you may lose, or stay as a slave despite you may win? It?s your own choice not the cold wire

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on March 7, 2019 at 8:04 pm

    A logline is supposed to sum up the whole plot in as fewer words as possible so a reader can understand clearly what the story is about.?Check out the "Our formula" tab for more help on how to write one. Currently, this is more of a tagline and doesn't actually tell me much about the story at all.

    A logline is supposed to sum up the whole plot in as fewer words as possible so a reader can understand clearly what the story is about.?Check out the “Our formula” tab for more help on how to write one. Currently, this is more of a tagline and doesn’t actually tell me much about the story at all.

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