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A young widow struggles with the consequences of killing her rapist in a post apocalyptic world.
I am not a big fan of the world 'struggles' Also, you might give us a hint of what the consequences of killing the man are. Other than that, the story sounds intriguing and that is half the battle! So overall, not bad. --- "When she kills the man who raped her, a young widow goes on the run in a posRead more
I am not a big fan of the world ‘struggles’
See lessAlso, you might give us a hint of what the consequences of killing the man are.
Other than that, the story sounds intriguing and that is half the battle!
So overall, not bad.
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“When she kills the man who raped her, a young widow goes on the run in a post-apocalyptic wasteland, when his vicious clan seeks revenge.”
THE INCREDIBLY, ALMOST MADE UP TRUE STORY OF THORTON T. THORTON The wealthy owner of a television network creates a show so offensive it results in a global backlash by America and its allies who will do anything to prevent the airing of the network’s lastest sitcom– which takes place in a Nazi concentration camp.
Hi pickerman123, How about: A deep delve into THORTON T's television network and its most offensive tv show. I hope this helps
Hi pickerman123,
How about:
A deep delve into THORTON T’s television network and its most offensive tv show.
I hope this helps
See lessA occult detective finds herself in a world of supernatural beings in dystopian America.
Hi IvyEight6, I personally like where you are going with this logline. That's why I need to know the answer to the following questions in order to help/review. Do you mean an undercover detective by an occult detective? or do you mean a detective who investigates occult cases? What other word/s canRead more
Hi IvyEight6,
See lessI personally like where you are going with this logline. That’s why I need to know the answer to the following questions in order to help/review.
Do you mean an undercover detective by an occult detective? or do you mean a detective who investigates occult cases?
What other word/s can you use instead of “dystopian”?
How does the detective find herself in the world of supernatural beings?