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His dad died when he was just 9. This Jamaican boy must now fight to survive in the Reggae-thumping streets of Jamaica, learning diplomacy for ultimately dealing with his 8 children and their 5 mothers, in harmony. ðŸ¤The movie starts with an incident where this boy at 18, approaches a notorious ganster’s girlfriend on a Reggae dance floor. A fight ensued after this boy broke a bottle over the gangster’s head……(Intiguinge)…
Hi Alrington, I don't understand. Are you saying "This Jamaican boy must learn diplomacy to ultimately deal with his 8 children and their 5 mothers, in harmony? What are you trying to say exactly? 1- This Boy has 8 children 2- This Boy has been married 5 times? 3- This Boy is Jamaican. 4- This Boy hRead more
Hi Alrington,
See lessI don’t understand. Are you saying “This Jamaican boy must learn diplomacy to ultimately deal with his 8 children and their 5 mothers, in harmony?
What are you trying to say exactly?
1- This Boy has 8 children
2- This Boy has been married 5 times?
3- This Boy is Jamaican.
4- This Boy has a fight in a bar with……
5- Intiguinge? (Do you mean to say Intriguing? Inspiring?
A blind boy who helps police identify and apprehend a possessed serial killer must now prove that he witnessed the crimes and convince the police that a demonic entity is the real culprit behind the recent homicides.
"blind boy" = protagonist "helps police identify and apprehend a possessed serial killer" = inciting incident "must prove he witnessed the crimes" = main character goal Seems the playfulness of this logline, might be the contrast of blindness vs. sight. How a blind individual's witness of a crime woRead more
“blind boy” = protagonist
“helps police identify and apprehend a possessed serial killer” = inciting incident
“must prove he witnessed the crimes” = main character goal
Seems the playfulness of this logline, might be the contrast of blindness vs. sight. How a blind individual’s witness of a crime would probably provide less useable evidence. But how this might link to a demonic entity, as the real homicide culprit, is the real challenge.
An important quality of story, is for the audience to first empathise with the main character. Tell us a little about the boy, not just his blindness, but one or two words describing his psychology. Courageous, weak, adventurous, timid … these are relatable qualities. That determine how he might relate to inciting incident events. That affect how he might emotionally respond to main goal struggles.
See lessWhen a jaded young woman goes missing on a work trip, three colleagues – her queer best friend, an alpha male and an average Joe – discover that she has fled to a secret civilisation inhabited only by women, where they all stay for a while.
When a jaded young woman disappears while on a business trip, three avid colleagues find out she has fled to a women-inhabited secret community and decide to keep her company for a while. I hope this helps.
When a jaded young woman disappears while on a business trip, three avid colleagues find out she has fled to a women-inhabited secret community and decide to keep her company for a while.
I hope this helps.
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