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A boy must save the magic in an alternate universe or have his own universe destroyed.
There are a few elements that if added to the logline in a concise manner would improve it. 1 What is threatening to destroy our universe. (Or the lead character's universe) This will help us understand the overall problem and also the stakes. 2 You say 'a boy' but what special powers does the boy hRead more
There are a few elements that if added to the logline in a concise manner would improve it.
1 What is threatening to destroy our universe. (Or the lead character’s universe) This will help us understand the overall problem and also the stakes.
2 You say ‘a boy’ but what special powers does the boy have so that we will know why it must be him that goes on this quest… (And it must be done in a word or two) When a “magically adept” boy (For instance)
3 How do the two universes connect? If the threat is in this universe why must he go into a different universe to save it?
Anyway, I believe adding these specifics will help the logline as long as they don’t add too much to the overall word count.
See lessTHE SHITHEADS is about a diverse group of young punks from rural Maine who strive to live every musician’s dream of sex, drugs, and if there’s time, rock ‘n’ roll.
A diverse group of young punks who to live every musician's dream of sex, drugs and rock and roll must ______________ when they form the The Shitheads and. Humorous problems arise when __________ ______ ______.
A diverse group of young punks who to live every musician’s dream of sex, drugs and rock and roll must ______________ when they form the The Shitheads and. Humorous problems arise when __________ ______ ______.
See lessWhen extraterrestrials who believe humans are annihilating the earth by pollution attempt to take a young boy they have bio-engineered to a new planet, the government uses armed forces to prevent this from happening, as they plan to use the boy as a super-soldier.
This confuses me because I don't understand why they have bioengineered the boy to another planet. Isn't this boy bioengineered to help save the Earth? Why would the armed forces of the Earth have the capability of preventing the boy's abduction? Maybe something like: A boy who has been bioengineereRead more
This confuses me because I don’t understand why they have bioengineered the boy to another planet. Isn’t this boy bioengineered to help save the Earth?
Why would the armed forces of the Earth have the capability of preventing the boy’s abduction?
Maybe something like:
A boy who has been bioengineered to eradicate the pollution that will end all life on Earth within a year must thwart the attempts of aliens who want to abduct him to save their world instead.
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