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When the family of S Brothers, who have made their fortune by making B- Grade horror movies, shifts to a palatial mansion, the family members starts getting disappearing mysteriously by the evil characters created by them in their movies, the to-be daughter-in-law has to bring them back before it is too late.
Sounds fun, leaning towards: “B-horror making brothers must fight to survive their manifested evil characters when filming in a haunted mansion” Add color by giving the mansion a name, possibly something synonymous with / notorious for being evil.
Sounds fun, leaning towards:
“B-horror making brothers must fight to survive their manifested evil characters when filming in a haunted mansion”
Add color by giving the mansion a name, possibly something synonymous with / notorious for being evil.
See lessA Self centered rising young artist must put aside his ego when he is forced to compete against his on and off girlfriend, for a record deal with a famous rapper’s upcoming label.
"Self-centred rising young artist" = protagonist "put aside his ego" = main character goal "girlfriend" = villain Art about art is always fun. To write a story about an artist, is to simultaneously be an artist and emphasize with their point of view. It's the epithet like quality of the last sentencRead more
“Self-centred rising young artist” = protagonist
“put aside his ego” = main character goal
“girlfriend” = villain
Art about art is always fun. To write a story about an artist, is to simultaneously be an artist and emphasize with their point of view.
It’s the epithet like quality of the last sentence that left me hanging:
“… for a record deal with a famous rapper’s upcoming label”
To be semantic, perhaps the main character is more specifically a Musician, singer or music industry related profession. Disorientated my initial image of the character (sorry, imagined a painter/artist).
‘Put his ego aside’ is very abstract for a character goal, but ‘win a record deal’ is much more specific. The implied character arch is from self-centered -> through to -> selfless. A virtuous and powerful story structure. But perhaps this might be expressed through the story conflicted? What if the villian were kind, selfless, generous, supportive of others? This would surely go up againist the grain of our protagonist’s character flaw.
Speaking of villains, who is the main villain: girlfriend, or rapper? Not that stories can’t have multiple bad guys, just that usually there is only one main climatic “Boss” character.
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Great start, but what is their goal, and who or what is stopping them from achieving it? Check out Blade Runner 2049 for research.
Great start, but what is their goal, and who or what is stopping them from achieving it?
Check out Blade Runner 2049 for research.
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