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A young woman gets a brain transplant to gives her the ability to see a fairytale world in stop an evil king from invading her land.
May be add some sort of antagonist for the audience pull factor
May be add some sort of antagonist for the audience pull factor
See lessTwo Yankees fans’ lives have changed forever when they decide to kidnap their favorite team player.
Sounds fun, probably a gold mine, but you need a WHY/GOAL. Example: A drunken duo pissed that concession prices are too damn high kidnaps their fav player holding him hostage until their ridic ransom demands are met. Take care.
Sounds fun, probably a gold mine, but you need a WHY/GOAL.
Example: A drunken duo pissed that concession prices are too damn high kidnaps their fav player holding him hostage until their ridic ransom demands are met.
Take care.
See lessA rural grandfather with a distant relationship with his urbanite daughter will try to convince her that his granddaughter study the next year in the village school and so the school will not close
I quite like this story for its unambitious nature, though I must admit this is a hard sell given that the stakes aren't very high since not many readers are going to be anxious whether or not a rural school stays open. Nevertheless, I've tried to simplify your logline all whilst adding my own takeRead more
I quite like this story for its unambitious nature, though I must admit this is a hard sell given that the stakes aren’t very high since not many readers are going to be anxious whether or not a rural school stays open. Nevertheless, I’ve tried to simplify your logline all whilst adding my own take on the characters.
“A distant grandfather must get his ill-parented granddaughter to attend the village school to prevent its closure at the reluctance of her workaholic mother.”
I removed “rural” and “urbanite” from the character descriptions since I feel the word “distant,” in conjunction with “the village school,” convey the physical distance between the characters. The secondary function of the word “distant” serves as implication that the relationship between the grandfather and his daughter and helps add to the tension between these two characters.
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