1. Posted: January 1, 2024In:

    🔥💧EMPÍDOCLUS: The sands of time🌪️⛰️ – Movie {🐺}

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    Example: On a distant planet governed by elementals, an unlikely group of [masters] set out to defeat the corrupt fire… Honestly, the rest of the logline falls under the "Show, don't tell" rule.

    Example:
    On a distant planet governed by elementals, an unlikely group of [masters] set out to defeat the corrupt fire…

    Honestly, the rest of the logline falls under the “Show, don’t tell” rule.

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  2. Posted: January 4, 2024In:

    After uncovering a grisly homicide near her newly assigned rural workplace a demoted city detective must play a game of cat and mouse with colleagues to reclaim her old job while covertly fighting to attain justice for her daughter.

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    Leaning towards: When reassigned to a small town leads to murder, a demoted detective fights to reclaim her position and justice for her slain daughter.

    Leaning towards:
    When reassigned to a small town leads to murder, a demoted detective fights to reclaim her position and justice for her slain daughter.

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  3. Posted: January 2, 2024In:

    In a world where virtual prisons are considered humane, a female inmate discovers she’s part of an elite-driven psychological experiment, and must fight to maintain her sanity and avoid becoming a tool for societal control.

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    If the protagonist's mind is her prison, does she fight to expose the baddie experimenters to stop the maltreatment of inmates?

    If the protagonist’s mind is her prison, does she fight to expose the baddie experimenters to stop the maltreatment of inmates?

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