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This story puts us in the shoes of Lena, a young mixed race, who dreams of becoming the best sorceress in the kingdom. However, there is a problem, the mestizos are not well received. Luckily, Lena does not give up easily and will do everything possible to achieve her dream.
Sounds interesting! Added “cabal” as her group to be prejudice against or kept as mixed-race, also gave her a goal once she achieves her dreams – make this yours. Example: "An aspiring sorceress must overcome cabal prejudices in order to gain the skills to save her kingdom" OR "An aspiring mixed-racRead more
Sounds interesting!
Added “cabal” as her group to be prejudice against or kept as mixed-race, also gave her a goal once she achieves her dreams – make this yours.
Example:
“An aspiring sorceress must overcome cabal prejudices in order to gain the skills to save her kingdom”
OR
“An aspiring mixed-race sorceress must overcome prejudices in order to gain the skills to save her kingdom”
Keep going, take care.
See less“A working-class wizard and his assistant help a girl rescue her friend who is being held captive by a voodoo priestess during Mardi Gras in New Orleans.”
Dig it! The damsel in distress and needing a rescue appears to be a friend of a friend, so I wrote up an example of her being more prominent – make this your own. Example: “A working-class wizard and his apprentice set out during Mardi Gras to rescue the mayor held captive by a New Orleans voodoo prRead more
Dig it!
The damsel in distress and needing a rescue appears to be a friend of a friend, so I wrote up an example of her being more prominent – make this your own.
Example:
“A working-class wizard and his apprentice set out during Mardi Gras to rescue the mayor held captive by a New Orleans voodoo priestess.”
Hope this helps, take care.
See lessA former suburban socialite and her troubled Gay son must confront their 17 yearlong feud after the father of a conservative Greek family commits suicide.
OK, first question, how is the conservative Greek connected to the socialite and her son? Second, I would clean it up a bit: A socialite and her troubled gay [no capital] son must resolve their decade-long feud, when ... [connect the suicide to the protagonists].
OK, first question, how is the conservative Greek connected to the socialite and her son?
See lessSecond, I would clean it up a bit: A socialite and her troubled gay [no capital] son must resolve their decade-long feud, when … [connect the suicide to the protagonists].