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  1. Posted: December 29, 2020In: Fantasy

    When a disgraced mermaid crown princess is banished to the human world, her kingdom is thrown into chaos as her wicked sisters scheme to fill the void and only she can stop them.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on December 30, 2020 at 3:07 am

    It’s a big ocean out there, added “Atlantis” to envision her home and showdown. Make this yours, leaning towards: “A banished mermaid princess must return to the sea in order to save Atlantis from her tyrannical sisters” Keep going, take care.

    It’s a big ocean out there, added “Atlantis” to envision her home and showdown.
    Make this yours, leaning towards:
    “A banished mermaid princess must return to the sea in order to save Atlantis from her tyrannical sisters”

    Keep going, take care.

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  2. Posted: December 27, 2020In: SciFi

    When a bounty hunter who hunts refugees from an alternative Earth uncovers he too is an alternate, he must put an end to his employer’s pursuit of him and those like him

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on December 28, 2020 at 5:29 am

    Cool, but hard to envision an "alternate" Earth and protag, what kind of refugees he hunts, and how he goes from a hunter to being hunted. EXAMPLE: "A bounty hunter of e.g. refugee humanoids must ..." Hope this helps, take care.

    Cool, but hard to envision an “alternate” Earth and protag, what kind of refugees he hunts, and how he goes from a hunter to being hunted.

    EXAMPLE:
    “A bounty hunter of e.g. refugee humanoids must …”

    Hope this helps, take care.

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  3. Posted: December 27, 2020In: Drama

    The suicide of a beloved kid sister and best friend prompt a self-centered trust fund kid and an ambitious young actress to plot revenge against the sinister political operative they hold responsible for her death.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on December 28, 2020 at 4:42 am

    Interesting, appears there are four to five people mentioned which is causing re-reads. Start simple with a relative anchor to your baddie e.g., “greed” then build from there. “A silver-spooned brat seeks revenge against a greedy politician for the death of his sister” Hope this helps, take care.

    Interesting, appears there are four to five people mentioned which is causing re-reads.
    Start simple with a relative anchor to your baddie e.g., “greed” then build from there.
    “A silver-spooned brat seeks revenge against a greedy politician for the death of his sister”

    Hope this helps, take care.

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