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Desperate to hide the disgraceful events surrounding his disbarment, a young attorney is forced to consider a deranged proposition from an aging, vengeful heiress, who is hellbent on protecting her family legacy through the silencing of a local critic.
Interesting, but here is a lot of shadow hiding pertinent details for me, please elaborate on the following: 1. Is our disbarred attorney harboring a fugitive from justice – the heiress? 2. For his arc, how does the entrance of her character or the acceptance of the “proposition” get him closer to bRead more
Interesting, but here is a lot of shadow hiding pertinent details for me, please elaborate on the following:
1. Is our disbarred attorney harboring a fugitive from justice – the heiress?
2. For his arc, how does the entrance of her character or the acceptance of the “proposition” get him closer to being reinstated as an attorney to be able to legally defend her?
3. The way the logline reads her critics are active and need to be silenced, but your elaboration puts this fight in the past? Why would a disgraced attorney who has retreated to a small-town risk further damage to his name by being an accomplice? OPINION – If there was a romance between the two, that may be a driver for his actions.
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See lessA high school student must race against time to stop robots from invading her school.
Think about the following while sharpening this logline. 1. What kind of world is this story set in? 2. Who is this high school girl? She must have something going for her if SHE is the one to stop a robot invasion. 3. Why NOW must she race against time? What is the leading factor to push this catalRead more
Think about the following while sharpening this logline.
1. What kind of world is this story set in?
2. Who is this high school girl? She must have something going for her if SHE is the one to stop a robot invasion.
3. Why NOW must she race against time? What is the leading factor to push this catalyst?
4. What do these robots want from her or the school? What is so special about them as targets?
I or the community can take a crack at this if you add your responses.
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To secure a university scholarship, a disadvantaged high school student must outwit two teachers who use her as a pawn in a wager to see if they can make two students fall in love.
Caveat: I am new to this stuff... To secure a university scholarship, a disadvantaged high school student must outwit two of her instructors who use her as a pawn in a wager to see if they can make her fall in love with her ... (enemy, friend, BFF, ex, other). I presume the "two instructors" are froRead more
Caveat: I am new to this stuff…
To secure a university scholarship, a disadvantaged high school student must outwit two of her instructors who use her as a pawn in a wager to see if they can make her fall in love with her … (enemy, friend, BFF, ex, other).
I presume the “two instructors” are from the university? Otherwise, “teachers” fits the high-school context.
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