1. Posted: August 15, 2023In:

    Spiralling amidst a divorce and losing custody of his daughter, a man takes a dangerous job shutting down an oil refinery with a band of salt-of-the-Earth co-workers.

    marliebear@outlook.com Penpusher

    SHUTDOWN Comps: OLD SCHOOL meets DEEP WATER HORIZON

    SHUTDOWN

    Comps: OLD SCHOOL meets DEEP WATER HORIZON

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  2. Posted: August 10, 2023In:

    When the past visits an overmedicated mental patient with a fascinating history, she awakens to unveil her story and upend her life at risk of a relapse. My name is Mary Magdalene.

    Richiev Singularity

    We have a lead character. Good What is the lead character's goal... Not sure from this logline. What is standing in the way of the lead's goal? These are essential to a logline

    We have a lead character. Good
    What is the lead character’s goal… Not sure from this logline.
    What is standing in the way of the lead’s goal?

    These are essential to a logline

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  3. Posted: August 10, 2023In:

    When sharman’s parents died in bringing her to life with superpowers abilities in her, in a world where commoners hope on the safety of their lives to the hero they turned against, sharman must destroy earth in absorbing more sound energy in defeating an alien invader who wants her powers.

    JC Miller Penpusher

    Yes, but needs work.

    Yes, but needs work.

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