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When a white supremacist cop is confronted by billboards calling out his chief’s neglect of a rape and murder case, he must silence the victim’s bitter mother and return peace to the town.
A gritty hell raiser launches a scorched earth billboard campaign in a hard scrabble small town when the cops bungle her daughter’s rape and murder investigation.
A gritty hell raiser launches a scorched earth billboard campaign in a hard scrabble small town when the cops bungle her daughter’s rape and murder investigation.
See lessAn Ex-CIA interrogator with a new life as an acupuncturist must survive Public Enemy No. 1 when her interpretive healing accidentally goes viral and exposes her government-subsidized hideout.
I notice you categorized it as a comedy. Hmm. It reads more like drama to me. I'm stating this as if I had not read any of the thread of discussion, as if I know nothing about the story other than the 28 words in the logline. What's the funny in the logline itself, the 28 words, that I'm not seRead more
I notice you categorized it as a comedy. Hmm. It reads more like drama to me. I’m stating this as if I had not read any of the thread of discussion, as if I know nothing about the story other than the 28 words in the logline. What’s the funny in the logline itself, the 28 words, that I’m not seeing?
Why is the bad guy coming after her? She’s small fish in the CIA pond. Or to mix and mangle metaphors, she’s merely a pawn in the Big Chess Game of geopolitics. Did her job as an interrogator entail torturing? If so, that needs to be in the logline because it explains the bad guy’s motivation for coming after her.
Why is she at the top of his personal sh*t list?
And her objective goal needs to be specific, concrete. Not merely surviving her attacker or healing whoever. The fact that a bad guy is coming after her seems to entails a ghost from the past coming back to haunt and kill her in the present. She must need to bring closure to some unfinished spook business, rectify a wrong done. Whatever.
An obvious ironical theme might be that she needs to heal a wound in her past before she can heal clients in the present. (And heal herself.) That could be interesting.
>>>government-subsidized hideout.
Not the way it’s done. I say that having known a number of retired spooks. Ex-spooks can and do boot up whole new careers with their generous retirement package. Just saying.
See lessAn animal-hating animal control officer wakes up as a stray dog and must find a way to turn back but when he’s impounded and scheduled to be put down he instigates a jailbreak to save himself and the other end-of-lifers
Since this is a family show, I ran your logline past my 11 years old – he was not a fan of “hating”, also “officer” and "instigate" threw him off the story. So, I familied it up – picture my kid reading your movie blurb at the Redbox ;)A diabolical dog catcher is transformed into a mutt and sets oRead more
Since this is a family show, I ran your logline past my 11 years old – he was not a fan of “hating”, also “officer” and “instigate” threw him off the story. So, I familied it up – picture my kid reading your movie blurb at the Redbox 😉
A diabolical dog catcher is transformed into a mutt and sets out on a mission to reverse the curse but when he’s caught and impounded he must bust out with his buddies in danger to complete the mission
Fun stuff Mike – take care..
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