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In an alternate 1930s metropolis, an airplane mechanic turned cyborg and an heiress turned adventurer must form a team to battle gangsters who have stolen experimental technology and plan to take over the city.
Maybe instead of mentioning the cyborg part and the heiress turn adventurer part just write two unlikely partners team together...? Also don't mention the stolen tech and just mention that gangsters want to take over the city.
Maybe instead of mentioning the cyborg part and the heiress turn adventurer part just write two unlikely partners team together…? Also don’t mention the stolen tech and just mention that gangsters want to take over the city.
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A logline isn't about mystery, it's about providing a concise summary of the plot up to either the midpoint or end of Act II using (ideally) no more than 40 words phrased as a single sentence. Hide the mystery and, as is frequently the case, it simply doesn't make sense. Or you bury the hook. EitheRead more
A logline isn’t about mystery, it’s about providing a concise summary of the plot up to either the midpoint or end of Act II using (ideally) no more than 40 words phrased as a single sentence.
Hide the mystery and, as is frequently the case, it simply doesn’t make sense. Or you bury the hook. Either way, it massively damages your chances of your script being read by anyone. So, yeah, I might get the gist if I read it, but I’m not as likely to read it if I don’t know what I’m reading. The beauty of a logline is that it’s not supposed (in my opinion – two schools of thought here) to give away the ending. So there is still that mystery but it’s the curiosity over what happens to the hero. What it’s most definitely not, is mystery over what the plot is actually about.
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Thanks I will keep working on the logline!
Thanks I will keep working on the logline!
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