1. Posted: April 1, 2020In:

    Two bickering sisters give into a malicious doll entity in return for success and fortune, however failure to provide another victim leads to fatal consequences.

    Odie Samurai

    I can see your story, but all the other sacrifice movies start to muddy the waters. If ?failure to provide another victim? means a story about the two bickering sisters trying to off the other to get the lucky charm from a doll ? that?s when it starts getting interesting.

    I can see your story, but all the other sacrifice movies start to muddy the waters. If ?failure to provide another victim? means a story about the two bickering sisters trying to off the other to get the lucky charm from a doll ? that?s when it starts getting interesting.

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  2. Posted: April 2, 2020In:

    When a peaceful young man from the hard streets of gangland Los Angeles accidentally travels through time and witnesses his grandfather commit murder, he fights to change the past without becoming as violent as his neighborhood. Note: Series pilot for an hour-long drama.

    Ninann22 Logliner

    There is a lot going on in this story from what you explained. It?s a little confusing. Adding time travel to a storyline can be risky, because it has been done so many times. In addition, it has to be clear so everyone gets it. Remember you have to pitch this idea. If you have to take time to explaRead more

    There is a lot going on in this story from what you explained. It?s a little confusing. Adding time travel to a storyline can be risky, because it has been done so many times. In addition, it has to be clear so everyone gets it. Remember you have to pitch this idea. If you have to take time to explain this to a producer , it?s a no go. Look into movies like the Butterfly Effect, Project Almanac, and the Time Travelers Wife for examples. That will help execute your idea better into a simple yet interesting concept.

    I hope this helps. Happy writing.

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  3. Posted: April 2, 2020In:

    When a war veteran suffering PTSD goes on a rampage in the woods, his brother joins up with his friends to hunt him down – and must get to him first before the others kill him.

    thedarkhorse Samurai

    Also - the working title for this was "KILL THE WICKED". I wanted to make you think about what exactly is "wicked". What is morally wrong. I think if I had to pick an overriding theme: I'd go with "a necessary evil". The pros and cons. That's a potent place. It's a universal idea - that unlike VietnRead more

    Also – the working title for this was “KILL THE WICKED”. I wanted to make you think about what exactly is “wicked”. What is morally wrong.

    I think if I had to pick an overriding theme: I’d go with “a necessary evil”. The pros and cons. That’s a potent place.

    It’s a universal idea – that unlike Vietnam, will never date.

    But yeah – I digress…

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