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  1. Posted: March 20, 2020In: Fantasy

    After a great war in Averia, a former female assassin seeking redemption is taken under the wing by a noble family, where she must learn to navigate high society while keeping her real identity a secret from the people that hunt her.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 25, 2020 at 9:58 pm

    Frankly, I think her past, her harrowing career as an assassin, would be more interesting than her struggles to escape that past by hiding out in high society.? The premise? in this logline is more suitable for a sequel.? First write an origin story.Just saying.?

    Frankly, I think her past, her harrowing career as an assassin, would be more interesting than her struggles to escape that past by hiding out in high society.? The premise? in this logline is more suitable for a sequel.? First write an origin story.

    Just saying.

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  2. Posted: March 24, 2020In: Horror

    An unsuccessful & frustrated young screenwriter search for ghosts to get inspired for writing horror screenplay as a final attempt

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    Added an answer on March 25, 2020 at 8:53 pm

    There is something interesting about your premise, but be warned - there are very few films about screenwriters that ever get made. Why? Probably because very few people can identify with the struggles of a screenwriter. Most people hardly even know what we do exactly. Having said that, if you do goRead more

    There is something interesting about your premise, but be warned – there are very few films about screenwriters that ever get made. Why? Probably because very few people can identify with the struggles of a screenwriter. Most people hardly even know what we do exactly.

    Having said that, if you do go through with this story, I would suggest introducing a strong inciting incident. Maybe something like Jumanji or Beatlejuice, e.g., your struggling horror writer could organize a seance in the old house. That would make them a more active hero. The ghost/s turn up, the writer gets his inspiration for a million-dollar story, but now the ghosts turn on him, and he can only reap his reward if he can escape the ghosts and get out of the house.

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  3. Posted: March 24, 2020In: Crime

    A desolate fugitive is forced out of hiding when his vengeful ex-partner in crime kidnaps his son.

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    Added an answer on March 25, 2020 at 8:41 pm

    'Desolate', as an adjective applied to a person means they are 'wretched or greatly unhappy'. Why is the hero so unhappy before his son is kidnapped? Considering he is in hiding, did you mean 'reclusive'? In general, the story you describe is too generic. I feel like I've seen this movie a million tRead more

    ‘Desolate’, as an adjective applied to a person means they are ‘wretched or greatly unhappy’. Why is the hero so unhappy before his son is kidnapped? Considering he is in hiding, did you mean ‘reclusive’?

    In general, the story you describe is too generic. I feel like I’ve seen this movie a million times in one form or another.

    Try and spice it up by suggesting a greater struggle for the hero, e.g. he’s a successful fugitive living in Mexico and must cross back across the border and risk being caught by the FBI in order to rescue his son from his vengeful ex-partner in crime.

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