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A rookie airport security guard battles absurd rules and corporate politics while managing a quirky group of night shifters, struggling to maintain his sanity and job amidst constant workplace drama.
The concept needs to be framed in terms of a singluar, specific objective goal the rookie is struggling to achieve inspite of crazy situations and absurd rules. What is the through line, the story spine on which all the other pieces hang?
The concept needs to be framed in terms of a singluar, specific objective goal the rookie is struggling to achieve inspite of crazy situations and absurd rules. What is the through line, the story spine on which all the other pieces hang?
See lessIn a post-apocalyptic world, five genetically enhanced children raised by a corrupted AI must navigate a crime-riddled society, unknowingly undermining a rival AI striving to end war and violence.
The hook of the story is carbon-based kids being raised by silicon-based AI. And I think it is an intriguing one. However: >>Dramatic Question: Are the kids really the future of the world, or are they the harbingers of its downfall? It is better to frame the dramatic question in terms of a speRead more
The hook of the story is carbon-based kids being raised by silicon-based AI. And I think it is an intriguing one.
However:
>>Dramatic Question: Are the kids really the future of the world, or are they the harbingers of its downfall?
It is better to frame the dramatic question in terms of a specific, concrete objective goal that either the kids or the the AI must achieve. What is that specific, concrete objective goal?
By that I mean, what’s the visual? Movies are a visual medium. What’s the visual on kids being “really the future of the world” or “harbingers of its downfall”?
What’s the scene that dramatizes and visualizes that the main character(s) have succeeded–or failed?
See lessA highly skilled young man trained in both physical and verbal warfare is forced into leadership as an opposing government works behind the scenes to eradicate his family and steal their resources
"forced into leadership..." to do what? What is his specific, concrete objective goal?
“forced into leadership…” to do what? What is his specific, concrete objective goal?
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