1. Posted: March 3, 2020In:

    A public defender doubles as a private dominatrix to support her family, but when a lonely, corrupt judge finds out she must sexually and emotionally satisfy a man with the power to ruin her life.

    OlDustyDogg Logliner

    Fantastic premise. So much potential but if she is a dominatrix why would she be averse to dominating the judge?

    Fantastic premise. So much potential but if she is a dominatrix why would she be averse to dominating the judge?

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  2. Posted: March 5, 2020In:

    A teenager must confront the father she put in prison before he wreacks havoc on her life and ruins her first chance at love.

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    deborah_b Logliner

    Thanks again for the insightful comments, team. I am enjoying this logline pinball and will continue to think the concept through ...!

    Thanks again for the insightful comments, team. I am enjoying this logline pinball and will continue to think the concept through …!

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  3. Posted: February 25, 2020In:

    A hairstylist?s session with a walk-in becomes much more when she begins to suspect the customer is the woman who abandoned her as a baby.

    kemority Penpusher

    If the current client is a walk-in, perhaps explain why that's significant to the story.? Is the salon appointment-only and the client begged for an exception due to some "hair emergency"?? ?I would also suggest giving an example or two explaining the background behind her suspicions; whether it's kRead more

    If the current client is a walk-in, perhaps explain why that’s significant to the story.? Is the salon appointment-only and the client begged for an exception due to some “hair emergency”?? ?I would also suggest giving an example or two explaining the background behind her suspicions; whether it’s knowing things only her mother would or something more alarming.? I’d be interested learning more.

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