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A widower, coping with the suicide of her wife, must battle against a corrupt corporate superpower and control to her growing supernatural abilities to save her daughter who they claim does not exist.
The poor grammar makes it unclear what the plot is or even why a conflict exists. What does the suicide have to do with the corporation, or the corporation with the daughter, or the supernatural abilities with any of it, or any of it with any of it? Trim it down to the essentials and form a proper sRead more
The poor grammar makes it unclear what the plot is or even why a conflict exists. What does the suicide have to do with the corporation, or the corporation with the daughter, or the supernatural abilities with any of it, or any of it with any of it?
Trim it down to the essentials and form a proper sentence. Keep it simple and clear. Then we can understand what it’s actually about.
See lessWhen King George III descends into madness, court physicians attempt to cure him with torturous remedies while his dissolute son conspires to usurp the throne.
Thank you for posting your method, It?s quite insightful. My only concern- I don?t know who the protagonist is.I like how this logline enables me to imagine the various forces driving the story; makes me want to know how it plays out.
Thank you for posting your method, It?s quite insightful. My only concern- I don?t know who the protagonist is.
See lessI like how this logline enables me to imagine the various forces driving the story; makes me want to know how it plays out.
After a plane crash strands him on a remote island, a hard-driving Fedex executive, who never had time for a personal life, now has all the time in the world to merely survive.
deborah_b:Respectfully noted.?? We all respond differently.? I think the emotional and thematic "juice" exists in the Act 3, in the resolution of the "B"? (relationship) story.? But that is beyond the scope of a logline.In crafting loglines for movies based upon scripts by others, I am sometimes torRead more
deborah_b:
Respectfully noted.?? We all respond differently.? I think the emotional and thematic “juice” exists in the Act 3, in the resolution of the “B”? (relationship) story.? But that is beyond the scope of a logline.
In crafting loglines for movies based upon scripts by others, I am sometimes torn between a logline that reflects how I wish the plot had been framed and how I perceive the plot was actually framed.
Mike Pedley:
“Never makes time…” is an interesting word choice.? Ultimately, characters in reel life and real life have to own their choices.? And the Tom Hanks character is very proactive in his job, a gung-ho, high energy leader of others.? But it is often the case that initially characters cave into the expectations of others, or the demand of their jobs.? That’s the choice they make, but they rationalize that they had no choice.
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