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A woman and a man meet and fall in love in their dreams. They are a part of an experimental program that’s getting canceled. They must find a way to meet in person before their connection is gone, if it was ever real.?
Interesting concept, I like it! Who is the protagonist? The man or woman. Personally I would add some extra twist regarding the dreaming/reality. A Lonely woman finds lover in dream through an experimental dreamlab, she search a way to connect in real life, but the program gets cancelled, or is thisRead more
Interesting concept, I like it!
Who is the protagonist? The man or woman.
Personally I would add some extra twist regarding the dreaming/reality.
A Lonely woman finds lover in dream through an experimental dreamlab, she search a way to connect in real life, but the program gets cancelled, or is this a dream?
See lessAfter his wife and childhood dies unexpectedly from an illness, a Marine gains the ability to time travel so that he can remember all the times he spent with her.
If he can timetravel, how is this related to getting memories back? If he does timetravel he?ll be physically there. Does he needs memories or physically be there? Depending on that : timetravel or something else? And. I guess the ptsd causes loss of memory? Just my 2 cents :-)
If he can timetravel, how is this related to getting memories back? If he does timetravel he?ll be physically there.
See lessDoes he needs memories or physically be there? Depending on that : timetravel or something else?
And. I guess the ptsd causes loss of memory?
Just my 2 cents 🙂
When an overprotected teenager? falls in love with an older rock-climber with trust problems, she convinces him to help her climb the dangerous “Watcher Crack” – but halfway up the wall they witness a murder and find themselves the target of a homicidal maniac desperate to cover his tracks.
Freewill:Re: A naive teen and her more-experienced partner witness a murder half-way through a remote rock-climb, and find themselves the target of the killer trying to cover his tracksI have no particular problem with this version in terms of the issue of unity and singularity of plot.I do have a qRead more
Freewill:
Re: A naive teen and her more-experienced partner witness a murder half-way through a remote rock-climb, and find themselves the target of the killer trying to cover his tracks
I have no particular problem with this version in terms of the issue of unity and singularity of plot.
I do have a question about the logline seeming to cast dual protagonists.? Who owns the story?? Who is your point of view character?? Who has the strongest arc?? Is the plot really about the relationship between the teen and the experienced climber?? Or…?
(FWIW: I favor framing the logline with the teen as the protagonist, the pov character, because then the film is more marketable: it can be promoted targeting the teenage/young adult demographic — the most desired and lucrative group.)
I am aware of but haven’t (yet) seen “The River Wild”.? Reading the plot summary at IMDB, it seems that Meryl Streep’s character is the protagonist because she’s the experienced guide, the one with the skill and knowledge to steer the raft.? And I’m guessing she’s the point of view character.
That is my provisional answer.? I’ve added it to my viewing queue.?? As is my practice, after I viewing a picture, I? will write my version of a logline? for it.
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