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When a conservative pastor learns his only son is homosexual, he tries to prevent his son from expressing himself as he struggles to come to terms with his son?s identity. or When a man decides to reveal to his father, a conservative pastor, that he is homosexual, he must maintain his individuality as his father tries to bend him to his will.
I don't see how this story idea differentiates itself from "Boy Erased" (2018).? The latter is more specific about the boy's predicament, and has a? more compelling inciting incident -- the pastor deliberately outs his son.? And "Boy Erased" confronts the son with a more specific and interesting draRead more
I don’t see how this story idea differentiates itself from “Boy Erased” (2018).? The latter is more specific about the boy’s predicament, and has a? more compelling inciting incident — the pastor deliberately outs his son.? And “Boy Erased” confronts the son with a more specific and interesting dramatic problem: the father sends him to a conversion camp.?
And “Boy Erased” is also based on real people, real events.
See lessA crisis manager gets recruited by the vigilante crew he idolizes to investigate if the family business he is paid to protect sells memories.
Investigate whether someone sells memories?? Obviously the family business does, otherwise the idea wouldn't be in the logline.? And there wouldn't be a a story to tell.?And the story to tell in the logline and script is what becomes his objective goal AFTER the discovery about the true nature of thRead more
Investigate whether someone sells memories?? Obviously the family business does, otherwise the idea wouldn’t be in the logline.? And there wouldn’t be a a story to tell.?
And the story to tell in the logline and script is what becomes his objective goal AFTER the discovery about the true nature of the family business.?? What must he do now — what becomes his objective goal?
See lessA crisis manager by day and citizen journalist by night is recruited by a vigilante mob to expose the corporation he is paid to protect.
Considering all of your super-detailed and incredibly welcome feedback, I've decided to give this concept one final push, after revising for a considerable period of time these past days. Special huge thank you to Mr. Danzig for his continued detailed feedback with all of my logline drafts. I have pRead more
Considering all of your super-detailed and incredibly welcome feedback, I’ve decided to give this concept one final push, after revising for a considerable period of time these past days. Special huge thank you to Mr. Danzig for his continued detailed feedback with all of my logline drafts. I have posted my logline as a 5th revision, and I look forward to your feedback as always, but I have a gut feeling this is the last revision and the one I will actively pursue as my next project. Thanks to all of you and this wonderful website again.
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