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A wheelchair bound girl and her friends fend off zombies, whilst visiting a cabin when she discovers her friends murdered them ? and she was next.
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thedarkhourse:My first version was exactly as you suggested.However, I believe that a logline should be immediately and entirely clear on the first read. An industry reader should not have to read a logline more than once to? understand what the story is about.? Maybe most readers would immediatelyRead more
thedarkhourse:
My first version was exactly as you suggested.
However, I believe that a logline should be immediately and entirely clear on the first read. An industry reader should not have to read a logline more than once to? understand what the story is about.? Maybe most readers would immediately understand the story concept with the version you suggested.? But just in case, as an insurance policy, I opted to pad my version with two more words for the sake of clarity.? It is certainly arguable that my padding was superfluous.
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Hi Chris,I'll give this a shot...Anything where the world is stake - well, the stakes are just innate so you probably don't need to push too hard there.In a post-plague world, lone survivors must stop a mass execution, but are caught up in a world-threatening conspiracy.I'm playing around here.I thoRead more
Hi Chris,
I’ll give this a shot…
Anything where the world is stake – well, the stakes are just innate so you probably don’t need to push too hard there.
In a post-plague world, lone survivors must stop a mass execution, but are caught up in a world-threatening conspiracy.
I’m playing around here.
I thought I’d lead with the lone survivors – the thief is one of them, right? As are the team?
Not sure what’s happening with the mass execution but that seems to be the goal.
Perhaps make the goal positive? “must save innocent people from a mass execution”.
or even “a thief must stop a mass execution of survivors”?
In a post-plague world, a thief must stop a mass execution of survivors, but is caught up in a world-threatening conspiracy.
Hmm… having him as a thief suggests a potential character arc of bad to good – which is good. He transforms. People love characters who change.
I dunno. That’s all I could do with what I’ve got.
Not sure where the conflict is.
INTENTION: stop a mass execution.
OBSTACLE: A world-threatening conspiracy??
We need to get a bit more detailed and specific with what’s standing in their way.
But yeah- sounds cool.
Good luck!
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