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When a devoted mother gets abducted by three dark entities into an alternate reality, a young girl, along with a sentient doll and a sly cat, must venture into the world to save her or she will never see her again.
Leaning towards: “When three dark entities from an alternate reality abduct a devoted mother, a young girl with a sentient doll and sly cat comes to the rescue.” What’s the intent of the three baddies for the mother? Use the answer to complete the rescue plan rewrite. I hope you find this constructiRead more
Leaning towards:
“When three dark entities from an alternate reality abduct a devoted mother, a young girl with a sentient doll and sly cat comes to the rescue.”
What’s the intent of the three baddies for the mother? Use the answer to complete the rescue plan rewrite.
I hope you find this constructive. Take care.
See lessThe global rise of demonic possessions brings together five exorcists from different faiths to combat an evil unlike any they have ever encountered.
Leaning towards: “A global rise of demonic possessions brings together five exorcists from different faiths to save the world from evil incarnate.” Since I don’t know the boss-level evil, whether it will be spiritual or physical (sounds physical based on possessions), I riffed with “incarnate.” I woRead more
Leaning towards:
“A global rise of demonic possessions brings together five exorcists from different faiths to save the world from evil incarnate.”
Since I don’t know the boss-level evil, whether it will be spiritual or physical (sounds physical based on possessions), I riffed with “incarnate.”
I would love to watch it, make this yours. Take care.
See lessWhen his older brother is blinded by a blow to the head, a hearing-impaired boy scout must guide his injured brother through a dense forest and back to safety.
I like the premise and I think your logline is pretty solid. ----- "When his older brother is blinded by a blow to the head while camping in the Blue Mountains, a hearing-impaired boy scout must guide his brother through dense forest, and dangerous animals, all with bad weather on the way." ----- YoRead more
I like the premise and I think your logline is pretty solid.
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“When his older brother is blinded by a blow to the head while camping in the Blue Mountains, a hearing-impaired boy scout must guide his brother through dense forest, and dangerous animals, all with bad weather on the way.”
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You should check out a 70s movie called “Walkabout.” It has a similar premise, however, your story ups the stakes with the head injury and the lead character also being hearing impaired.
Great Idea, good luck with this!
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