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To save their planet, a couple of aliens have come to earth in order to find the resources that help them develop their super powers.
I'm picturing a Superman prequel, where Kryptonians are treating earth as a "yellow sun spa".? ?I think you have goals and stakes, so that's good.? However, the "save the world" thing is a little ambiguous.? We can really use some sense of a "save the world from <what>" I think.? Also, I thinkRead more
I’m picturing a Superman prequel, where Kryptonians are treating earth as a “yellow sun spa”.? ?I think you have goals and stakes, so that’s good.? However, the “save the world” thing is a little ambiguous.? We can really use some sense of a “save the world from <what>” I think.? Also, I think you’re relying on tropes a bit much with the conflict.? Typically, when aliens visit earth, they have to stay incognito and avoid the military, who wants to capture/end them.? I guess that’s the danger here?? Or is earth somehow more of a proactive ally?? It’d be nice if we had a sense of what stance us earthlings had with regards to the alien heroes and their plight.
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A logline is a summary of the plot.? And a plot faces forward in time, not backwards.? A plot is about where a character wants to go in the future, not where she's been in the past.Flashbacks may serve a purpose in the script to explain how the character came to be washed up,. But the logline shouldRead more
A logline is a summary of the plot.? And a plot faces forward in time, not backwards.? A plot is about where a character wants to go in the future, not where she’s been in the past.
Flashbacks may serve a purpose in the script to explain how the character came to be washed up,. But the logline should be framed in terms of and focus on her future goal, her struggle for a comeback.
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Second one: A workaholic playwright, in desperate need of a hit, must seize back control of his play, after his ex-wife, a control freak actress, takes over to direct.
Second one: A workaholic playwright, in desperate need of a hit, must seize back control of his play, after his ex-wife, a control freak actress, takes over to direct.
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