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  1. Posted: October 10, 2019In: Fantasy

    Para uma webserie

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on October 12, 2019 at 11:54 am

    What's going on with all these Spanish posts?! Please post in English only.

    What’s going on with all these Spanish posts?!

    Please post in English only.

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  2. Posted: October 6, 2019In: Drama

    A struggling Aborginal widow is determined to make her 4 bi-racial daughters into a huge international girl band to guarantee they’ll never see poverty again.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on October 12, 2019 at 11:52 am

    If she is a 'stage mum', describe her as such - perhaps a failed performer in her own right. Otherwise, she comes across as silly, and the premise makes little sense.    

    If she is a ‘stage mum’, describe her as such – perhaps a failed performer in her own right. Otherwise, she comes across as silly, and the premise makes little sense.

     

     

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  3. Posted: October 9, 2019In: Action

    When he finds a cowardly family-man accidentally locked in their 9-way assassin?s battle royale to win a contract paying enough to retire with, a moral veteran must keep him alive whilst eliminating the competition.

    Philippe Le Miere Logliner
    Added an answer on October 11, 2019 at 2:40 pm

    Thumbs up - can see how suggestions helped. Had the "Ah, I get it now" moment. So protagonist is the Assassin - much cooler! And cowardly/accountant/family-guy is the Victim and Boon (prize)... motivating primary character action during oppositional battle royale conflict. Any psychological dimensioRead more

    Thumbs up – can see how suggestions helped.

    Had the “Ah, I get it now” moment. So protagonist is the Assassin – much cooler! And cowardly/accountant/family-guy is the Victim and Boon (prize)… motivating primary character action during oppositional battle royale conflict.

    Any psychological dimension to our assassin? No one’s perfect, we all have our faults. Maybe if he is a venten, then he has some unresolved past … Could help character be more likeable.

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