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  1. Posted: October 5, 2019In: Thriller

    (revised) When her mother is brutally murdered, a family woman must find out who her mother was, in order to uncover what happened; but when a cult from her mother?s secret past starts to infiltrate her life , she must save her family and herself from the cults? grip or risk becoming victims themselves.

    Scott Danzig Samurai
    Added an answer on October 6, 2019 at 12:58 am

    Seems better... but I'm wondering if this can be simplified to just jump to the cult. After learning of a secret cult's responsibility for her mother's brutal murder, a woman must now save herself and her family from being their next victims. I think that gets to the interesting part more directly aRead more

    Seems better… but I’m wondering if this can be simplified to just jump to the cult.

    After learning of a secret cult’s responsibility for her mother’s brutal murder, a woman must now save herself and her family from being their next victims.

    I think that gets to the interesting part more directly and still remains true to the story, no?? I don’t think it’s important to make explicit how the cult operates.? I do like the mother “investigating the mother’s secret past”, but I don’t think that’s part of the hook for this movie.

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  2. Posted: October 4, 2019In: Horror

    Two strangers find themselves in an abandoned town, Penance Peak, and as the sun begins to set, they begin to realise that their dark secrets can?t stay hidden forever.

    Scott Danzig Samurai
    Added an answer on October 5, 2019 at 5:21 pm

    It sounds like they're going to turn into werewolves.? If they are, make the town not abandoned, and instead full of werewolf hunters.? Also need a reason why they can't just leave the town, if this town, abandoned or not, is a problem.

    It sounds like they’re going to turn into werewolves.? If they are, make the town not abandoned, and instead full of werewolf hunters.? Also need a reason why they can’t just leave the town, if this town, abandoned or not, is a problem.

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  3. Posted: September 6, 2019In: Drama

    When a transgender black woman kills a mentally ill murderer, she is put on trial for life, the jury, who vary from rich to poor to caring to prejudiced,? are caught up in a spiral of grey areas – and a case that exposes the increasingly mad world they live in.

    kpetrakis01 Logliner
    Added an answer on October 5, 2019 at 9:05 am

    I'm guessing that the transgender description should have some significance or why put it in there. Maybe evidence points to male and transgender person says it's impossible as he/she is a woman. Tell me why that's important in playing out the trial. I agree with above comments in the significance oRead more

    I’m guessing that the transgender description should have some significance or why put it in there. Maybe evidence points to male and transgender person says it’s impossible as he/she is a woman. Tell me why that’s important in playing out the trial. I agree with above comments in the significance of the victim – he is both mentally ill and a murderer – how does the protagonist fit in? Is it about the the person on trial or the jury? If you want to focus on the jury, the dilemma could be from the perspective of the juror who finds conflict in the story….it depends if we are going to see the story from the trangender person’s perspective or the jurors perspective…

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