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The House A family of four moves into a house in a small town only to find out there is more that meets the eye, the house sucks people alive.
What does the phrase "the house sucks people alive" mean? Now that the family knows the house is haunted, what must they do and why must they do it? Try building your logline along the following skeleton: When a [adjective] family of four moves into an [adjective] house and finds it haunted by [whatRead more
What does the phrase “the house sucks people alive” mean?
Now that the family knows the house is haunted, what must they do and why must they do it?
Try building your logline along the following skeleton:
When a [adjective] family of four moves into an [adjective] house and finds it haunted by [whatever], they must [do something] before [something bad happens].
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I like the idea of a woman faced with an inciting incident that forces her to must finally start acting her age.? However, I would like one more clarification.? When you say she's "aging" -- approximately what age do you have in mind?? Mid 30's, on the cusp of 40... or?? I think that needs to be madRead more
I like the idea of a woman faced with an inciting incident that forces her to must finally start acting her age.? However, I would like one more clarification.? When you say she’s “aging” — approximately what age do you have in mind?? Mid 30’s, on the cusp of 40… or?? I think that needs to be made a little more specific because it seems to be a important story element.
See lessA modern retelling of Sophocles’ tragedy Oedipus Rex with a twist. – EDDIE WRECKS – When an arrogant basketball star goes back to his dingy hometown to attend the funeral of his estranged mother, he ignores the plight and warning of his loved ones leading him to the devastating realization that at one time he inadvertently had sex with father and he is the perpetrator of his mother’s murder.
This is an awesome concept, I would love to watch this! The logline sounds very tragic and sophisticated. I would shorten it slightly to something like this: 'An arrogant basketball star returns to his dingy hometown to attend? the funeral of his estranged mother. He ignores the warnings of his loveRead more
This is an awesome concept, I would love to watch this! The logline sounds very tragic and sophisticated. I would shorten it slightly to something like this: ‘An arrogant basketball star returns to his dingy hometown to attend? the funeral of his estranged mother. He ignores the warnings of his loved ones, leading to the devastating realization he may equate into his mother’s suicide.’
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