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A na?ve but gifted young paralegal working late finds herself trapped in an empty giant parking garage and must defend herself against the shadowy contract killer hired to kill her.
Why is the fact that she's a paralegal relevant? Or the fact that she's gifted? Or naive for that matter? These things should give me some clue as to why someone would go to the length of hiring an assassin to kill her. Or at least suggest how she is going to be able to survive this encounter. SurelRead more
Why is the fact that she’s a paralegal relevant? Or the fact that she’s gifted? Or naive for that matter? These things should give me some clue as to why someone would go to the length of hiring an assassin to kill her. Or at least suggest how she is going to be able to survive this encounter.
Surely, a contract killer would just shoot her from a distance? This is what they does for a living right? She’s just a naive paralegal… so how is she supposed to defend herself against someone who kills people like this every day?
Is this for a feature length or a short? At the moment I’m struggling to see this sustaining a 90mins+ runtime.
See lessAfter discovering her utopian town is the result of a government experiment, a tenacious teenage girl must reverse the symbiosis before it becomes permanent, or risk a fate worse than repressive governmental overreach: being just like everyone else.
As the others have pointed out, this is a good idea, but the wording is a bit obtuse, and by that I mean not just the word "symbiosis", but also "repressive government overreach" and "just like everyone else". What experiment is the government conducting and how does it keep the people from leaving?Read more
As the others have pointed out, this is a good idea, but the wording is a bit obtuse, and by that I mean not just the word “symbiosis”, but also “repressive government overreach” and “just like everyone else”.
What experiment is the government conducting and how does it keep the people from leaving? Or is it just the girl who is being deceived and not the entire town?
One of the teenagers in “American Beauty” is afraid of being like everyone else, but her chosen path to escape the fate of the common man turns out to be a dead end. What is so ominous about being just like everyone else?
You placed the logline under “Comedy”, but I don’t see the comedic elements.
See lessAn ambitious war photographer fakes a combat photograph of a young boy in the Vietnam War and struggles with his guilt when the photograph shifts public opinion against the war and wins a Pullitzer Prize.
>>>in the same way as Quiz Show (1994) or Shattered Glass (2003). Okay, and both movies were based on scandals that really happened.? Is the premise in this logline based on a real scandal?? I am unaware of a scandal involving a Pulitzer Prize winning fake photo of the Vietnam War? which isRead more
>>>in the same way as Quiz Show (1994) or Shattered Glass (2003).
Okay, and both movies were based on scandals that really happened.? Is the premise in this logline based on a real scandal?? I am unaware of a scandal involving a Pulitzer Prize winning fake photo of the Vietnam War? which is why I am unable to suspend disbelief.? It there was then the logline needs to specifically indicate the year and the incident.
Just saying..
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