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After discovering his new and only friend?s family relies heavily on government handouts, a sheltered teenager struggles against his privileged upbringing and his parent?s ideals to maintain this relationship.
Hi Mike,Pretty solid logline. Nice work. My only input would be to think about giving your protagonist a bigger obstacle in life, something the audience would feel more sympathy for other than the issues caused by a privileged upbringing. I chose stutter below, as maybe the new friend helps him contRead more
Hi Mike,
Pretty solid logline. Nice work. My only input would be to think about giving your protagonist a bigger obstacle in life, something the audience would feel more sympathy for other than the issues caused by a privileged upbringing. I chose stutter below, as maybe the new friend helps him control that but you could be any impediment. This logline is a bit to long and wordy but you get the idea. Any just a thought.
“A social outcast because of his stutter, a teenager discovers his first real friend’s family relies heavily on government handouts and desperately struggles to maintain the friendship as his privileged upbringing and parents ideals threaten to destroy it.”
Johnny
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The logline sets up a situation but doesn’t follow through with a complete plot.? What is the objective goal, here??? And who owns the objective goal, the humanoids or the “outside forces”?? And what’s at risk, what are the stakes?? I suggest you run this logline through the logline generator.
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