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  1. Posted: July 23, 2019In: Coming of Age

    After a homeless toddler sells his beloved cuddly toy for millions of dollars and lives a life like a king with hundreds of toys, he realizes that money is not the same as happiness, so he goes out to find the owner to get his toy back.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on July 23, 2019 at 5:32 pm

    Yeah... I have a toddler at home... he'd give you his favourite toy for a biscuit. If the child was a little older then I might believe it could happen but even then, how is the child going to buy a home to put all his toys in. He's a child so won't have a bank account... is he just walking around wRead more

    Yeah… I have a toddler at home… he’d give you his favourite toy for a biscuit.

    If the child was a little older then I might believe it could happen but even then, how is the child going to buy a home to put all his toys in. He’s a child so won’t have a bank account… is he just walking around with millions of dollars in cash?

    I think whichever you play this it’s always going to be a stretch.

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  2. Posted: July 21, 2019In: Adventure

    A wannabe activist who aspires to join a larger action group gets a job at a mysterious energy company he believes is involved in illegal activities.

    savinh0 Samurai
    Added an answer on July 23, 2019 at 3:16 am

    Sounds like a promising idea! Just make sure to be more specific in your wording. He needs to have a clear outer goal (want) that is properly described in your logline. And yes, "environmental activist" sounds better than just "activist", because it gives the reader a clear vision of the main characRead more

    Sounds like a promising idea!

    Just make sure to be more specific in your wording. He needs to have a clear outer goal (want) that is properly described in your logline.

    And yes, “environmental activist” sounds better than just “activist”, because it gives the reader a clear vision of the main character and his background.

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  3. Posted: July 22, 2019In: Biography, Examples

    After her attorney husband shows her an obscure tax law discriminating against men, future Supreme Court Justice Ruth Bader Ginsburg uses it to challenge laws that discriminate against women.

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    Added an answer on July 23, 2019 at 3:12 am

    Mikepedley85:I can see your point on "tax law case" , but I think "challenge" does the job in terms of the target audience to whom the premise might appeal.Ginsburg was playing a long game. She used the case to (short term) establish a precedent to (long term) take down laws that discriminated againRead more

    Mikepedley85:

    I can see your point on “tax law case” , but I think “challenge” does the job in terms of the target audience to whom the premise might appeal.

    Ginsburg was playing a long game. She used the case to (short term) establish a precedent to (long term) take down laws that discriminated against women.? One law at a time –? that’s the way the legal system works.? The film focuses on the opening round of decades of trench warfare against laws that discriminate against women.

    BTW: The inciting incident (her husband bring to the case to her attention) occurs in the 40th minute of the film.?

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