1. Posted: September 11, 2022In:

    Two FBI cybercrime specialists must track down the world’s most notorious cybercriminals before they succeed in hacking into the Federal Reserve Bank of New York’s online website.

    Marlene2 Penpusher

    I think this has potential. There is a timeline there: before they hack into the bank. There is the race against time. Computer work is frustrating. It increases the suspense.

    I think this has potential. There is a timeline there: before they hack into the bank. There is the race against time. Computer work is frustrating. It increases the suspense.

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  2. Posted: September 9, 2022In:

    A nature-loving environmental student discovers a sentient fungi is causing holiday makers on a remote campsite to consume petrochemicals – and then each other.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi SuzyMiller, Here's what I see so far based on your proposed logline and synopsis: But I believe there's more to this story. I know there's a challenge/conflict. Read this logline, use it as a template, and re-write. While on holiday at a remote campsite, a student discovers a sentient fungus is tRead more

    Hi SuzyMiller,

    Here’s what I see so far based on your proposed logline and synopsis:

    But I believe there’s more to this story. I know there’s a challenge/conflict. Read this logline, use it as a template, and re-write.

    While on holiday at a remote campsite, a student discovers a sentient fungus is turning campers into petrochemicals-consuming cannibals and must ……..(do what?)

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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  3. Posted: September 9, 2022In:

    A good-for-nothing private investigator participates in a 7 day complex scavenger hunt to prove his worth

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi Arijitaro, What will happen if he does not prove his worth? or why does he have to prove his worth? I can see a conflict/challenge missing somewhere. Am I right? If so, include it and re-write. I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi Arijitaro,

    What will happen if he does not prove his worth? or why does he have to prove his worth?

    I can see a conflict/challenge missing somewhere. Am I right? If so, include it and re-write.

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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