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  1. Posted: September 7, 2022In: Short Film

    Living storybook characters must rewrite their bookended existence before every night upon suspecting their owner, ever-growing Evelyn, may one day shelve their illustrative livelihood.

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on September 8, 2022 at 3:08 pm

    Hi Lotcher, Here is what I see: "To create excitement and remain entertaining for a young girl to read, living storybook characters must rewrite their bookended existence every night to postpone being shelved and forgotten." I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi Lotcher,

    Here is what I see:

    “To create excitement and remain entertaining for a young girl to read, living storybook characters must rewrite their bookended existence every night to postpone being shelved and forgotten.”

    I hope this helps

    Good Luck

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2022In: Horror

    After being bullied and left for dead, a high school student returns from the dead as a ghost to kill her tormentors in their dreams.

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on September 7, 2022 at 5:52 pm

    Hi tony18, This is how I see it: A high school student's ghost returns to kill those who tormentors and left him for dead. I hope this helps

    Hi tony18,

    This is how I see it:

    A high school student’s ghost returns to kill those who tormentors and left him for dead.

    I hope this helps

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2022In: Action

    A young university student haunted by his past decides to return to his work as a hero to keep the city safe from a strange visitor from another time.

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on September 7, 2022 at 5:47 pm

    Hi Angelous vera , This is how I see it so far: A young man decides to become a superhero and keep the city safe from a malevolent time traveler. However, I think you have to clarify certain points in your logline: A young university student (what is the significance of mentioning the lead characterRead more

    Hi Angelous vera ,

    This is how I see it so far:

    A young man decides to become a superhero and keep the city safe from a malevolent time traveler.

    However, I think you have to clarify certain points in your logline:
    A young university student (what is the significance of mentioning the lead character is a young university student?)
    haunted by his past (What past? How did it affect the present?)
    decides to return to his work (What is his work? and why “return”? Did he leave his job at some point?)
    as a hero
    to keep the city safe (How?)
    from a strange visitor from another time who wants to do what?

    I hope this helps
    Good luck

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