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  1. Posted: September 6, 2022In: Comedy

    When a miserable man on the brink of divorce finds out that both he and his wife are having an affair with the same woman, he must win the love of the mistress before his wife does.

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on September 6, 2022 at 6:17 pm

    Hi SeanKingston, Here's what I see: "On the verge of divorce, a man discovers he and his wife are cheating on each other with the same woman and must win his mistress's heart before his wife does." I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi SeanKingston,

    Here’s what I see:

    “On the verge of divorce, a man discovers he and his wife are cheating on each other with the same woman and must win his mistress’s heart before his wife does.”

    I hope this helps

    Good Luck

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  2. Posted: September 6, 2022In: Drama

    When he youngest of three sisters, depending on her boyfriend for happiness, crosses the Atlantic Ocean to say good-bye to her estranged father before he dies, she must confront and finally put an end to the painful patterns of her childhood that have affected all her relationships.

    Lotcher Samurai
    Added an answer on September 6, 2022 at 5:47 pm

    "An over-reliant romantic must independently see her dying father one last time all whilst confronting the resurrecting demons of her long forgotten childhood." Sorry if my attempt at condensing your logline doesn't quite line up with your story since I honestly had trouble understanding the intricaRead more

    “An over-reliant romantic must independently see her dying father one last time all whilst confronting the resurrecting demons of her long forgotten childhood.”

    Sorry if my attempt at condensing your logline doesn’t quite line up with your story since I honestly had trouble understanding the intricacies of said story. For clarity’s sake try to omit details such as, “the youngest of three sisters,” and “cross[ing] the Atlantic Occean,” since these come off as unnecessary given they don’t seem to have all that much significance, ay least as far as the logline alone goes.

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  3. Posted: September 6, 2022In: Drama

    When a researcher at the tv-show Wanted, happy with her second marriage family life with five weirdly wired kids, believes a suspect they’re haunting down in the tv-show might be her son, she must act to both uncover and protect him, and while doing so her life starts spiraling down.

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on September 6, 2022 at 5:36 pm

    Hi Justine, Reading your logline, I can see something like this: "An investigative journalist's unhappy marriage starts spiraling down after she discovers the suspect she's researching might be her son and she must both uncover the truth and protect him at the same time." I hope this helps

    Hi Justine,

    Reading your logline, I can see something like this:

    “An investigative journalist’s unhappy marriage starts spiraling down after she discovers the suspect she’s researching might be her son and she must both uncover the truth and protect him at the same time.”

    I hope this helps

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