1. Posted: March 21, 2020In:

    A married woman accidentally drinks a love potion and falls in love with a shy prince. Her open-hearted husband is excited for her, but the King isn’t.

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    Alison Penpusher

    Not quite sure why her husband would be OK with that. Not sure what the stakes are either. What's her journey?

    Not quite sure why her husband would be OK with that. Not sure what the stakes are either. What’s her journey?

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  2. Posted: March 20, 2020In:

    After they spend a night together falling in love, a couple part ways because of WWII, and years later, the man, presumed dead, turns up at her hometown to win her back – only to discover she is married.

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    dpg Singularity

    Seems similar to "Cast Away"? where the guy's girlfriend? marries someone else after he is presumed to not have survived the plane crash.Also, it seems delusional and inordinately selfish of the guy to think that she would not marry,? not move on with her life, that she would have a candle burning iRead more

    Seems similar to “Cast Away”? where the guy’s girlfriend? marries someone else after he is presumed to not have survived the plane crash.

    Also, it seems delusional and inordinately selfish of the guy to think that she would not marry,? not move on with her life, that she would have a candle burning in the window for him and him alone for 16 years.

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  3. Posted: March 2, 2020In: , ,

    A total loser works for a ruthless Vegas casino boss to jinx gamblers. But after he falls in love with a cocktail waitress, gamblers become winners instead. Now he must save his Lady Luck from the boss’s murderous wrath.

    variable Uberwriter

    I think your version is pretty good. One sentence makes it clunky; this is as far as I could get-When love debuffs his jinx, a hapless employee must save his lady from the ruthless casino boss

    I think your version is pretty good. One sentence makes it clunky; this is as far as I could get-
    When love debuffs his jinx, a hapless employee must save his lady from the ruthless casino boss

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