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After falling for the tennis world champion, a no-name photographer gets a job at the Wimbledon tournament and pretends to be a successful newspaper owner to win her heart.
Savinh0:One other thought:? The shy-guy must compete for her attention and affection with a romantic rival who is everything he isn't.? And may be pushing for and on the verge of getting her to marry him.The end of Act 2 "darkest hour" could be her agreeing to marry the rival.? And she asks the shyRead more
Savinh0:
One other thought:? The shy-guy must compete for her attention and affection with a romantic rival who is everything he isn’t.? And may be pushing for and on the verge of getting her to marry him.
The end of Act 2 “darkest hour” could be her agreeing to marry the rival.? And she asks the shy guy photographer to shoot their wedding.
Now what will he do?? What must he do?
Whatever, I see a more interesting story with your protagonist in the role of a photographer than the other roles you have been auditioning him in other loglines.
fwiw
See lessWhen a social phobic former photographer falls in love with the number one tennis star in the world, he must overcome his anxieties in order to get back his job and be with her.
>>>the pictures he took (hanging at his home)Suggest instead:? Instagram, Flickr, etc. (If the pictures are only hanging in his home, and he only goes out at night -- how will she ever know about them, even know he exists?)So, she's going to rescue him.? What does she get in return?? What'sRead more
>>>the pictures he took (hanging at his home)
Suggest instead:? Instagram, Flickr, etc. (If the pictures are only hanging in his home, and he only goes out at night — how will she ever know about them, even know he exists?)
So, she’s going to rescue him.? What does she get in return?? What’s in the relationship for her?? Where’s the reciprocity?? What can he do for her that she needs?
See lessAfter assassinating the German ambassador in wartime Casablanca, an intelligence officer marries his French Resistance partner. But when she is suspected of being a Nazi spy, he must find out her true identity.
What is interesting about this film in terms of loglining is that the second sentence constitutes the MPR (Midpoint Reversal)? that occurs an hour into the film.? The film is essentially the splicing together of two one hour episodes set in two? 2? locations.? The 1st hour is set in Casablanca, theRead more
What is interesting about this film in terms of loglining is that the second sentence constitutes the MPR (Midpoint Reversal)? that occurs an hour into the film.? The film is essentially the splicing together of two one hour episodes set in two? 2? locations.? The 1st hour is set in Casablanca, the 2nd in London.? Everything that happens in the 1st hour is prologue and setup for everything that happens in the 2nd hour.
It’s also worth noting? how the IMDB summary phrases the post-Casablanca episode:? “When they reunite in London, their relationship is tested by the pressures of war.”? Which is hiding the game ball,; it leaves the reader utterly clueless as to the main action of the 2nd half, the dramatic problem the protagonist must solve.? Something a logline should? not do.
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