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Drawn to older men, an idealistic teenager starts dating an unmarried software engineer and is forced to choose between free will to love with her heart or obey societal norms to appease the locals.
I agree with everything already said. Also: what is the big deal? Old men with young women has always been a clich?. There are some movies that also explore the reverse (Harold and Maude, Fear Eats the Soul, et al). What I'm saying is: age difference is not a very convincing taboo anymore. What's soRead more
I agree with everything already said.
Also: what is the big deal? Old men with young women has always been a clich?. There are some movies that also explore the reverse (Harold and Maude, Fear Eats the Soul, et al).
What I’m saying is: age difference is not a very convincing taboo anymore. What’s so special about your story’s couple?
See lessA shy researcher in an isolated science station falls in love with the voice of his Russian counterpart, when he doesn’t hear from her for 24 hours he sets out across the tundra to find her.
I like the idea, I think everyone has already made good suggestions. There's definitely a way to trim the word count and still stress the situation, physical conflict and the emotional one too.
I like the idea, I think everyone has already made good suggestions. There’s definitely a way to trim the word count and still stress the situation, physical conflict and the emotional one too.
See lessWhen a plague of supernatural scoundrels menaces a tiny frontier town, its hot-headed deputy is forced to drag his boyfriend out of monster hunter retirement to save the citizens?even if their heroics jeopardize their budding romance.
This new version is much better."Supernatural scoundrels" - as much as I like a bit of alliteration I can't visualise what supernatural scoundrels are. Can you describe them more cinematically? What are they trying to achieve? Rob the bank? Eat people? Currently, it sounds like they're just menacingRead more
This new version is much better.
“Supernatural scoundrels” – as much as I like a bit of alliteration I can’t visualise what supernatural scoundrels are. Can you describe them more cinematically? What are they trying to achieve? Rob the bank? Eat people? Currently, it sounds like they’re just menacing for fun. It would be better if they had a goal too.
The protagonist is the Sheriff’s Deputy who convinces his monster-hunting boyfriend to save the town. I want the protagonist to be fighting the monsters. I’m sure that will be the case but I think that should be reflected in the logline. It kinda seems like the protagonist’s goal is simply to get his boyfriend to save the town. Make it clear that they are fighting together (if that’s the case). Alternatively, make the boyfriend the protagonist with a backstory (these supernatural beasties killed his partner – make it personal). Is there a reason why the MC is the deputy rather than the boyfriend?
Where’s the Sheriff in all of this? I’m just curious.
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