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  1. Posted: October 23, 2017In: Romance

    A hopeless romantic is stuck in a love triangle with her fiance and his bestman, and has three months to choose who she walks down the isle with.

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    Added an answer on October 25, 2017 at 6:53 am

    Why should we care who she chooses especially since there is no urgency with 3 months to do so.? ?Titanic, The Notebook, Sweet Home Alabama, and? Twilight, to mention a few, all have these love triangle decisions.? What makes your characters fit this bill?

    Why should we care who she chooses especially since there is no urgency with 3 months to do so.? ?Titanic, The Notebook, Sweet Home Alabama, and? Twilight, to mention a few, all have these love triangle decisions.? What makes your characters fit this bill?

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  2. Posted: October 12, 2017In: Romance

    When a hopeless romantic student meets his holiday romance in Hong Kong by accident, he takes her out to similar spots like 10 years ago, hoping to spark her interest again before he leaves in 12 hours. (short film)

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    Added an answer on October 12, 2017 at 4:09 pm

    The obstacle is not clear. If he truly loves her, he'll bite the bullet and cancel the plane ticket to stay with her. Why not give him a moral dilemma? What if? He is engaged and his fiance is waiting for him to return from a business trip in time for their wedding. But he falls in love with his higRead more

    The obstacle is not clear. If he truly loves her, he’ll bite the bullet and cancel the plane ticket to stay with her.

    Why not give him a moral dilemma? What if? He is engaged and his fiance is waiting for him to return from a business trip in time for their wedding. But he falls in love with his high school sweetheart in Hong Kong and must find out if she feels the same before canceling the ticket and sticking around or flying back to a woman he feels obliged to marry.

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  3. Posted: October 10, 2017In: Romance

    A lovesick student turns down his dream-intership to travel to Hong Kong to meet his holiday romance, but after he loses his phone he has to figure out other ways of finding her within 12 hours before he flies back again. (Note: it’s a short film concept)

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    Added an answer on October 10, 2017 at 10:04 am

    Agreed with Foxtrot25 and DPG, this has very low stakes. Perhaps it's the shortcoming of the genre for someone like myself, but it seems as though,?to his own detriment, he's a hopeless romantic. His flaw appears to be that he's naive and lacks a sense of priority, does he change by the end of the sRead more

    Agreed with Foxtrot25 and DPG, this has very low stakes.

    Perhaps it’s the shortcoming of the genre for someone like myself, but it seems as though,?to his own detriment, he’s a hopeless romantic. His flaw appears to be that he’s naive and lacks a sense of priority, does he change by the end of the story? Or does he remain the romantic he was at the start?

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