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When an aspiring writer blogs anonymously about her dates, one of them finds out who she is and continues dating her in order to improve his dating style to ask out someone else.
This kind of sounds like all single men - go out with one woman, if it doesn't go well try try again... What is the 'hook'? What about this stands out from the large number of other romance stories? Not sure how his actions make an audience want to go see the movie at home or the theater. Sorry forRead more
This kind of sounds like all single men – go out with one woman, if it doesn’t go well try try again…
What is the ‘hook’? What about this stands out from the large number of other romance stories?
Not sure how his actions make an audience want to go see the movie at home or the theater.
Sorry for the negativity, simply being totally honest.
See lessWhen a lonely computer programmer hacks a dating site, she inadvertently creates an empathetic Artificial Intelligence, which finds ?Mr. Right? just as the government terminates the A.I.
If the government terminated the AI, there's not much left for the MC to do. However, if the AI was put a risk by the government then the MC could fight to keep it/him alive. What is the MC's goal? This sounds like the start of a story but doesn't deliver on the promise of a dramatic need for the auRead more
If the government terminated the AI, there’s not much left for the MC to do. However, if the AI was put a risk by the government then the MC could fight to keep it/him alive.
What is the MC’s goal? This sounds like the start of a story but doesn’t deliver on the promise of a dramatic need for the audience/reader to want to follow.
See lessWhen a teenage Jewish boy in Auschwitz learns his dream girl is Hitler?s daughter, he decides to stand up from the eyes of the SS and show death is not the only arousing them and not an infatuation he had on her.
Andrew. After every thing we've written and all the notes you've been given, I simply can't understand what it is you're trying to do now. Look at all the comments you've already gotten for this concept in your other posts - they all still apply.
Andrew.
After every thing we’ve written and all the notes you’ve been given, I simply can’t understand what it is you’re trying to do now.
Look at all the comments you’ve already gotten for this concept in your other posts – they all still apply.
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