1. Posted: September 10, 2020In:

    When a determined Papuan girl falls for a graduate with a fatal illness she convinces him to flee his crazy fiancé and allow her Medicine man grandfather to heal him and have him accepted by her people.

    IvyEight6 Penpusher

    What a great story? I hope it comes to life.

    What a great story? I hope it comes to life.

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  2. Posted: September 8, 2020In:

    After being dumped by his longtime girlfriend, a man who believes in eternal love asks for a second chance and they are given the magical opportunity to start from the beginning with what they know today and do better.

    Odie Samurai

    Very cool, don’t we all wish we had this do-over chance 😉. Getting an “About Time & Click” movie vibe from this. 1. Most of these shows focus on the complications of time travel and have to come up with some unique method of how the time travel can occur which I am not seeing in your logline. ThRead more

    Very cool, don’t we all wish we had this do-over chance 😉. Getting an “About Time & Click” movie vibe from this.
    1. Most of these shows focus on the complications of time travel and have to come up with some unique method of how the time travel can occur which I am not seeing in your logline. This will give focus to your magical opportunity and the stakes.
    2. Think about amping up your inciting incident e.g. “After being dumped by his longtime girlfriend, …” but make this your own, many loglines start like this – you get the idea. One way to keep the reader curious when constructing your logline is to have them questioning – how is he going to keep this reluctant girlfriend from saying “check, please” at any given moment?

    Take care.

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  3. Posted: April 30, 2017In:

    After a man cheats on his wife, the married couple struggles to recapture their love by attending the same events from their first summer together as teenagers, only to meet his affair again there.

    AmandaC Penpusher

    This sounds interesting because of he meets his love interested again and now with his wife when they want to find each other again. It could be a typical love story but I think because of the twist that his affair coming back to their life just when they have decided to move on and stay together. IRead more

    This sounds interesting because of he meets his love interested again and now with his wife when they want to find each other again. It could be a typical love story but I think because of the twist that his affair coming back to their life just when they have decided to move on and stay together. It’s a fun twist and would be very interested to see the wife reaction, how she handle it and the husband too. Will the husband stay away from his affair or will he fall back again and will the wife be strong to go through it all or end it forever. And how many times will the wife meet his lover, is ut one event or more and if that’s the case how will the wife handle it, it can start that she is strong and believe they can make it through but the more the see his lover the more unsure she gets. And his lover, will she be sorry and talk to the wife or will she try to take hm again.

    This could be good film.

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