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  1. Posted: February 22, 2020In: SciFi

    When Superpowered Nelly discovers that her mother is not really death, but a lie implanted in her head, she goes on a crazy journey to discover the truth, but her evil father has other plans for her.

    Trix Samurai
    Added an answer on February 24, 2020 at 7:39 pm

    Hi Birdman, I agree with the others: Superpowered - are we in a superpower world or is this power a result of some part of the story? A crazy journey - this could mean anything. ?What is she searching for? ?Her mother? ?The truth about what specifically? Her evil father feels quite comic book - thatRead more

    Hi Birdman, I agree with the others:

    • Superpowered – are we in a superpower world or is this power a result of some part of the story?
    • A crazy journey – this could mean anything. ?What is she searching for? ?Her mother? ?The truth about what specifically?
    • Her evil father feels quite comic book – that may be the feel you’re going for, but the father needs more motivation than just being evil – he’s the hero in his own story.
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  2. Posted: February 14, 2020In: SciFi

    A woman and a man meet and fall in love in their dreams. They are a part of an experimental program that’s getting canceled. They must find a way to meet in person before their connection is gone, if it was ever real.?

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    Birdman Penpusher
    Added an answer on February 22, 2020 at 11:47 pm

    Interesting concept, I like it! Who is the protagonist? The man or woman. Personally I would add some extra twist regarding the dreaming/reality. A Lonely woman finds lover in dream through an experimental dreamlab, she search a way to connect in real life, but the program gets cancelled, or is thisRead more

    Interesting concept, I like it!
    Who is the protagonist? The man or woman.
    Personally I would add some extra twist regarding the dreaming/reality.

    A Lonely woman finds lover in dream through an experimental dreamlab, she search a way to connect in real life, but the program gets cancelled, or is this a dream?

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  3. Posted: February 15, 2020In: SciFi

    After his wife and childhood dies unexpectedly from an illness, a Marine gains the ability to time travel so that he can remember all the times he spent with her.

    Birdman Penpusher
    Added an answer on February 22, 2020 at 11:16 pm

    If he can timetravel, how is this related to getting memories back? If he does timetravel he?ll be physically there. Does he needs memories or physically be there? Depending on that : timetravel or something else? And. I guess the ptsd causes loss of memory? Just my 2 cents :-)

    If he can timetravel, how is this related to getting memories back? If he does timetravel he?ll be physically there.
    Does he needs memories or physically be there? Depending on that : timetravel or something else?
    And. I guess the ptsd causes loss of memory?
    Just my 2 cents 🙂

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