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A stressed out business exec takes up meditation for relief, only to have visions of his employees miserable lives should his failing business go under
This seems like just the inciting incident to me, what is he going to do about it? What's his goal? When his stress-relieving meditation gives him premonitions of his employees' miserable lives should his business fail, a XXXXX XXXXX must... He's doing something to combat stress = he's stressed TheyRead more
This seems like just the inciting incident to me, what is he going to do about it? What’s his goal?
When his stress-relieving meditation gives him premonitions of his employees’ miserable lives should his business fail, a XXXXX XXXXX must…
He’s doing something to combat stress = he’s stressed
They’re his employees and it’s his business = business exec
This leaves plenty of scope to describe the main character in a new way so we get even more information about who he is.
Hope this helps.
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I like having a Native American protagonist.? But having her save humanity from itself is vague.? What is the specific problem that humanity collectively needs to be rescued from?And who is the face of that problem -- the proxy antagonist?? Who is global enemy #1 who needs to be vanquished?
I like having a Native American protagonist.? But having her save humanity from itself is vague.? What is the specific problem that humanity collectively needs to be rescued from?
And who is the face of that problem — the proxy antagonist?? Who is global enemy #1 who needs to be vanquished?
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"When the African preacher they brutalized begins using powers, two racist cops must escape the inhuman being or lose their souls forever."?
“When the African preacher they brutalized begins using powers, two racist cops must escape the inhuman being or lose their souls forever.”?
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