1. Posted: August 22, 2022In:

    A race car driver who comes out of retirement signs up for a televised deadly game show with another driver who hates him.

    NavCR Penpusher

    That reminds me of Death Race 🤔. I would like to see that in a movie.

    That reminds me of Death Race 🤔. I would like to see that in a movie.

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  2. Posted: August 4, 2022In:

    After finding out his moms artificial heart is failing, a low level hacker navigates a seedy cyberpunk underworld to do whatever it takes to keep her alive.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi biscayneCreative, I think you should relate "a seedy cyberpunk underworld" to "his mom's artificial heart that is failing". I mean what is he looking for in a seedy cyberpunk underworld? What is he hoping to achieve by navigating a seedy cyberpunk underworld? How can he save his mom's life by navRead more

    Hi biscayneCreative,

    I think you should relate “a seedy cyberpunk underworld” to “his mom’s artificial heart that is failing”. I mean what is he looking for in a seedy cyberpunk underworld? What is he hoping to achieve by navigating a seedy cyberpunk underworld? How can he save his mom’s life by navigating a seedy cyberpunk underworld? Also IF something is stopping him? Any challenges (if any)?

    I suggest you re-write and ask again.

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  3. Posted: July 22, 2022In:

    A occult detective finds herself in a world of supernatural beings in dystopian America.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi IvyEight6, I personally like where you are going with this logline. That's why I need to know the answer to the following questions in order to help/review. Do you mean an undercover detective by an occult detective? or do you mean a detective who investigates occult cases? What other word/s canRead more

    Hi IvyEight6,
    I personally like where you are going with this logline. That’s why I need to know the answer to the following questions in order to help/review.
    Do you mean an undercover detective by an occult detective? or do you mean a detective who investigates occult cases?
    What other word/s can you use instead of “dystopian”?
    How does the detective find herself in the world of supernatural beings?

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