1. Posted: September 6, 2022In:

    When they accidentally pick up an unknown and hostile alien life form in space, third officer Ellen Ripley and her crew must destroy it before it kills everyone on board.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi Rodallex, "A female captain and her astronaut crew must destroy a strange and vicious alien creature they unintentionally picked up before it kills everyone onboard." I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi Rodallex,

    “A female captain and her astronaut crew must destroy a strange and vicious alien creature they unintentionally picked up before it kills everyone onboard.”

    I hope this helps

    Good Luck

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  2. Posted: August 22, 2022In:

    A race car driver who comes out of retirement signs up for a televised deadly game show with another driver who hates him.

    NavCR Penpusher

    That reminds me of Death Race 🤔. I would like to see that in a movie.

    That reminds me of Death Race 🤔. I would like to see that in a movie.

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  3. Posted: August 4, 2022In:

    After finding out his moms artificial heart is failing, a low level hacker navigates a seedy cyberpunk underworld to do whatever it takes to keep her alive.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi biscayneCreative, I think you should relate "a seedy cyberpunk underworld" to "his mom's artificial heart that is failing". I mean what is he looking for in a seedy cyberpunk underworld? What is he hoping to achieve by navigating a seedy cyberpunk underworld? How can he save his mom's life by navRead more

    Hi biscayneCreative,

    I think you should relate “a seedy cyberpunk underworld” to “his mom’s artificial heart that is failing”. I mean what is he looking for in a seedy cyberpunk underworld? What is he hoping to achieve by navigating a seedy cyberpunk underworld? How can he save his mom’s life by navigating a seedy cyberpunk underworld? Also IF something is stopping him? Any challenges (if any)?

    I suggest you re-write and ask again.

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