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  1. Posted: October 20, 2018In: SciFi

    When a lonely teenager, raised by intelligent machines, dreams they are lying about the extinction of humankind, he decides to run away on a perilous quest to find other humans.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 26, 2018 at 11:59 am

    RE:?I never said he lived in the outbackYou wrote in an earlier comment:? "...go south of Australia (he is near Lake Amadeus)."? So I assumed....Whatever, my general point stands:? the setting should confront him with insurmountable obstacles, life-threatening jeopardy from the git-go.

    RE:?I never said he lived in the outback

    You wrote in an earlier comment:? “…go south of Australia (he is near Lake Amadeus).”? So I assumed….

    Whatever, my general point stands:? the setting should confront him with insurmountable obstacles, life-threatening jeopardy from the git-go.

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  2. Posted: October 24, 2018In: SciFi

    When her orbital city of New Delhi is destroyed, a spirited Indian girl escapes to Freedom city determined to join the space force and take down the evil prophet of New Babylon, who?s responsible for the loss of everyone she loved.?

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on October 25, 2018 at 7:15 am

    Some stories are all plot, Misery for example. The characters don?t change and they have only physical and immediate needs. The logline you have tells me that?s this movie, which is great. But if it is more about character then A girl seeking revenge for the destruction of her planet .....

    Some stories are all plot, Misery for example. The characters don?t change and they have only physical and immediate needs. The logline you have tells me that?s this movie, which is great.

    But if it is more about character then

    A girl seeking revenge for the destruction of her planet …..

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  3. Posted: October 23, 2018In: SciFi

    After an experiment-gone-wrong leaves a scientist broken and hurt, the scientist looks for a new place and a new life where he can belong.

    Octavious Luck Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 24, 2018 at 2:10 am

    What exactly does broken and hurt mean?? Is it physical, mental or emotional?? What did he loose by becoming physically, mentally or emotionally broken?? Family?? Did he become disabled?? What was the loss here?

    What exactly does broken and hurt mean?? Is it physical, mental or emotional?? What did he loose by becoming physically, mentally or emotionally broken?? Family?? Did he become disabled?? What was the loss here?

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