1. Posted: September 7, 2022In:

    Living storybook characters must rewrite their bookended existence before every night upon suspecting their owner, ever-growing Evelyn, may one day shelve their illustrative livelihood.

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    Hi Lotcher, Here is what I see: "To create excitement and remain entertaining for a young girl to read, living storybook characters must rewrite their bookended existence every night to postpone being shelved and forgotten." I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi Lotcher,

    Here is what I see:

    “To create excitement and remain entertaining for a young girl to read, living storybook characters must rewrite their bookended existence every night to postpone being shelved and forgotten.”

    I hope this helps

    Good Luck

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  2. Posted: September 2, 2022In:

    A journalist joins a cult having a very different idea about it. He soon finds out its not what he thought it was.

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    Hello almostfilmmaker, Please clarify so we can help: A journalist joins a cult. Why? having a very different idea about it. (What he? She? thought he/she will get out of joining the cult?) He soon finds out it is not what he thought it was How does he find out? What does he/she find out? What doesRead more

    Hello almostfilmmaker,
    Please clarify so we can help:

    A journalist joins a cult. Why? having a very different idea about it. (What he? She? thought he/she will get out of joining the cult?) He soon finds out it is not what he thought it was How does he find out? What does he/she find out? What does He/she learn?

    Cheers
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  3. Posted: August 22, 2022In:

    Two inquisitive friends get teleported into a roller coaster sim game and must complete an objective by satisfying a stern park inspector to get back home.

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    Hi RailGamm97, This is how I see it. Two friends who end up in a virtual reality park must complete an impossible task for a stern park inspector so he would allow/help them get back home. If so, use this as a template and re-write. Good luck. I hope this helps

    Hi RailGamm97,

    This is how I see it.

    Two friends who end up in a virtual reality park must complete an impossible task for a stern park inspector so he would allow/help them get back home.

    If so, use this as a template and re-write. Good luck.

    I hope this helps

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