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When a memory-wiped babysitter stumbles upon a bloodied photograph of a child in her home, she must seek clues to uncover the child’s identity before a lurking neighbour contacts the authorities.
When a resourceful, but forgetful young babysitter stumbles upon a bloodied photograph of another child while on caring duty, she seeks clues to uncover this child’s identity. But when a nosy neighbour contacts authorities, she must take on adult responsibilities to protect the children, or risk furRead more
When a resourceful, but forgetful young babysitter stumbles upon a bloodied photograph of another child while on caring duty,
she seeks clues to uncover this child’s identity.
But when a nosy neighbour contacts authorities,
she must take on adult responsibilities to protect the children, or risk further blood shed.
theme = individual responsibility leads to community well being
– consider a positive protagonist trait – “resourceful”?
See less– consider neighbour as the primary antagonist – maybe they are the murder?
Un amigo que quiere decir como se siente con su vida, pero no se siente comprendido por su amigo
[English translation] "A friend who wants to say how he feels about his life, but does not feel understood by his friend." When an empathetic, but oversensitive young protagonist experiences being taken for granted by a self-centered friend he must learn to adopt an easygoing nature, or risk never bRead more
[English translation] “A friend who wants to say how he feels about his life, but does not feel understood by his friend.”
When an empathetic, but oversensitive young protagonist
experiences being taken for granted by a self-centered friend
he must learn to adopt an easygoing nature, or risk never being about to forgive his best friend.
theme: self-care leads to care for others
protagonist’s want: Friend Centered…
protagonist’s need: Self-Centered…
[Spanish translation]
Cuando un joven protagonista empático pero hipersensible
Experiencias que un amigo egocéntrico da por sentado.
debe aprender a adoptar una naturaleza tranquila o correr el riesgo de no perdonar nunca a su mejor amigo.
Tema: El autocuidado conduce al cuidado de los demás.
See lessDeseo del protagonista: Centrado en el amigo…
Necesidad del protagonista: Egocéntrico…
When sent a package containing her boyfriend’s belongings, a conflicted lover must uncover the cause of his disappearance; but when she learns he willingly vanished to pursue space travel, she must embrace selflessness and accept his decision.
I like it! But the ACTION in the second half can be stronger. Right now it only gives us her psychological growth, not a visible (filmable) action. Of course, short films are more flexible, and perhaps the climactic scene is about just that: her acceptance... In any case, try the Logline Generator (Read more
I like it! But the ACTION in the second half can be stronger. Right now it only gives us her psychological growth, not a visible (filmable) action. Of course, short films are more flexible, and perhaps the climactic scene is about just that: her acceptance…
In any case, try the Logline Generator (link above), and you’ll see that the better version of this logline might be along the lines of:
When sent a package containing her boyfriend’s belongings, a conflicted lover must uncover the cause of his disappearance; but when she learns he willingly vanished to pursue space travel, she must embrace selflessness and accept his decision BEFORE [Final Action].
I still think that there could be a final action that SHOWS her transformation.
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