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A man looks for how his brother died, only to find it in the deadliest game known to man, a deadly version of soccer, which he plans to win become unstable when he finds the truth about his brother. (I revised)
Agreed with all the above. I'll add that the one most important story element a logline must include (not imply) is a goal - what is your main character's goal? Revenge? Stop the deadly game? Save the other players from a similar fate? Whatever it is, you need to describe it in the logline.
Agreed with all the above.
I’ll add that the one most important story element a logline must include (not imply) is a goal – what is your main character’s goal? Revenge? Stop the deadly game? Save the other players from a similar fate? Whatever it is, you need to describe it in the logline.
See lessAfter several defeats, a determined young boxer prepares for a last chance to reignite his career while dealing with his unsupportive family and the hoodlums he grew up with.
I?m no expert on the matter but I will say that it's not the boxing ring rather what motivates the boxer to enter it that will sell the script. In other words, develop the story around the boxer character but don?t let the boxing alone be his goal.
I?m no expert on the matter but I will say that it’s not the boxing ring rather what motivates the boxer to enter it that will sell the script. In other words, develop the story around the boxer character but don?t let the boxing alone be his goal.
See lessA team full of talented people lose to a below average team due to teamwork, so they hire the other teams coach.
The main thing is, your lead should have a personal goal Your character should have lost something personal, like his girlfriend. Now in order to get her back he and the good looking team hire the washed up coach of the underdog team believing if he wins the championship he will get the girl back, ORead more
The main thing is, your lead should have a personal goal
See lessYour character should have lost something personal, like his girlfriend.
Now in order to get her back he and the good looking team hire the washed up coach of the underdog team believing if he wins the championship he will get the girl back,
Only to realize she left him because he did not treat her right, it wasn’t about winning all along it was about who he was. (He was a jerk before now he has to grow into a better person)