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  1. Posted: June 12, 2017In: Superhero

    When a young girl with special brain abilities finally escapes her prison, she?s seen as a weapon of mass destruction by both sides of a rebellion ? but she?s just searching for peace.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 29, 2017 at 2:47 am

    "a young renegade prisoner with unusual mental powers tries to live a normal life, only to find herself at the center of a rebellion with both the sides seeking to use her as weapon of mass destruction"

    “a young renegade prisoner with unusual mental powers tries to live a normal life,
    only to find herself at the center of a rebellion
    with both the sides seeking to use her as weapon of mass destruction”

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  2. Posted: August 31, 2017In: Superhero

    A retired superhero who lost his superpowers, needs to defeat his resurrected archrival once again, to save the world.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on September 3, 2017 at 3:44 am

    What Nir Shelter said. ?It's a generic pot boiler plot that could work for all the existing superhero franchises. ?I don't see anything that stands out, that's makes it new, different from what's already been done and reprised ad infinitum.

    What Nir Shelter said. ?It’s a generic pot boiler plot that could work for all the existing superhero franchises. ?I don’t see anything that stands out, that’s makes it new, different from what’s already been done and reprised ad infinitum.

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  3. Posted: May 29, 2017In: Superhero

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 30, 2017 at 6:13 am

    RE: >>> That?s a thing I don?t want to give in the logline. Like The Matrix does with its logline: >>>?A computer hacker learns from mysterious rebels about the true nature of his reality and his role in the war against its controllers.? >>>It?s vague but part of the fun oRead more

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    >>> That?s a thing I don?t want to give in the logline. Like The Matrix does with its logline:
    >>>?A computer hacker learns from mysterious rebels about the true nature of his reality and his role in the war against its controllers.?
    >>>It?s vague but part of the fun of the first act is the discovering of the mysterious nature of the premise, in my opinion.

    Uh, my second opinion on that point. ? A logline’s target market is movie makers, producers and investors, not movie viewers. ?Ergo, a logline has a different purpose than a movie blurb (the kind of one-liners posted on IMDB). ?I don’t think a logline should play hide-and-seek with it’s ?premise and story hook.

    imho

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