1. Posted: June 10, 2024In:

    Three good for nothing youths unexpectedly gain superpowers and must save their crumbling city, YGN, from complete destruction.

    quantumpoet Penpusher

    The logline is pretty clear but comes across quite generic. Once I read the synopsis I was intrigued, because now I understood what was personally at stake and his knowledge of the future. I think you should distill it into a more specific logline. E.g. focusing on the fact that he can see the futurRead more

    The logline is pretty clear but comes across quite generic. Once I read the synopsis I was intrigued, because now I understood what was personally at stake and his knowledge of the future. I think you should distill it into a more specific logline. E.g. focusing on the fact that he can see the future and has to change the present to stop a catastrophe that will kill his future wife and destroy the nation.

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  2. Posted: August 5, 2023In:

    Living her youthful age seems that everyone is trying to kill her for taking her price paid gifted God’s eye power. A mirrow-like earth planet alien invades ready to do whatever it takes to have the one alike power of the universe which we leave her no choice but to destroy earth in order to convert alot energy in defeating the invader. 

    Odie Samurai

    Please use the available Generator link in the header to help with formatting, then repost here for the community to help. Take care.

    Please use the available Generator link in the header to help with formatting, then repost here for the community to help.

    Take care.

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  3. Posted: April 20, 2022In:

    When akward Miles Morales,ascends as the next spiderman he is forced to use his new powers to stop the Evil Kingpin,from attaining the master-key of the doomsday collider that threatens to vanish humanity into the abyss.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi, atemu, I suggest you start by using the below logline as a template. When an amateur young man arises as the next spiderman, he is forced to use his powers to stop an evil top dog from the destruction of humanity. I hope this helps.

    Hi, atemu,

    I suggest you start by using the below logline as a template.

    When an amateur young man arises as the next spiderman, he is forced to use his powers to stop an evil top dog from the destruction of humanity.

    I hope this helps.

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