1. Posted: June 4, 2022In:

    [English] In a seemingly normal world, one of the best university students finds her world turns bloody and her mind begins to wander as she discovers who she and her father are, who took her life apart.

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    Things are happening to your lead character, but what does the lead character actually want, what is the lead character's goal?

    Things are happening to your lead character, but what does the lead character actually want, what is the lead character’s goal?

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  2. Posted: January 21, 2022In:

    Disillusioned with social media’s influence, Lightning Girl retires, but she’s forced into one final battle, without superhero powers, when her nemesis, her brother, cuts off Seattle’s water supply.

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    When her brother cuts off the water supply to Seattle, a disillusioned superhero must (Do this thing) in order to (Prevent this bad thing from happening)

    When her brother cuts off the water supply to Seattle, a disillusioned superhero must (Do this thing) in order to (Prevent this bad thing from happening)

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  3. Posted: December 10, 2021In:

    A middle aged outcast becomes determined to seek revenge against his abusive wife as a masked vigilante armed with a robotic pistol.

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    Why does he need to dress up as a vigilante to get revenge, if it is his wife, they live in the same house? You might need to add a little bit more to this logline.

    Why does he need to dress up as a vigilante to get revenge, if it is his wife, they live in the same house?

    You might need to add a little bit more to this logline.

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